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    Default Poem: The Carnal Requiem

    No more I'd wish to think,
    Even less I would require-
    A furnishing of sin
    For this carnal desire

    And even less I'd ponder
    No more could I judge,
    Significance be less
    No more than a nudge

    Under laces tied tight
    A fire forever worn,
    Within loins of amethyst
    Bastard children to be born

    A pointlessness of sultry
    What my beast would pursue,
    The Poison is the pinnacle
    Of what a soul would consume

    But the eyes bleed less
    Than the heart; far more blind
    Binding by the sound of-
    Heartstrings well refined

    With every chorus a whisper
    To Mephistopheles' Choir,
    And every pint of love,
    Would be inferred and required

    I drink to the nights when the charades
    Felt like reality within a heart,
    And toast to the most moist waves
    Where faith and reason avidly depart


    Perhaps the world was never meant to make perfect sense.


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    Default Re: Poem: The Carnal Requiem

    Wow, there's so much emotion in this poem! *_* It was amazing!

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    Default Re: Poem: The Carnal Requiem

    ^_^ Yes, Tetsa does that a lot when he writes. Always making sure the descriptions are deep and readable before going on to the next part. It's why I look up to him, I wish to be as good with my writing someday. Wonderful work, as always, it is great to see another one of your poems up, it had been a while. Keep writing, my friend.
    I am no more a rose than I am its thorns.
    No more a gentle breeze than I am the hailing storm.
    I am no more hated than I am loved.
    And I am no more heartfilled than I am heartless.
    This is who I am.
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    Default Re: Poem: The Carnal Requiem

    You do me so much honor with your praise, Rose. Thank you.

    I've been a ninja for a while on AF, and just decided to post a more recent work.


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    Default Re: Poem: The Carnal Requiem

    Wow! I didn't know that you still post on here!
    I deffinately felt the words, they sunk into me. I definitely felt the imagery with the eyes and the heart.

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    Default Re: Poem: The Carnal Requiem

    so emotional and i feel it too much
    it has no voice but it goes well with the instrumental i'm listening to o_o

    it's too good, too awesome


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