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[ELR]

I ask for criticism, I do not mind harsh words if it does not work well, all I ask is read, enjoy, and write (if you wish) your thoughts of what you read, and to write what could be fixed. Thank you, my friends. *bow*

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There is a time and a place,
An emotion shown in grace,
Facts thrown in my face,
Engulfed in tremors of black lace...

What could I have seen there?
As I had reached out in fear,
To lose it in this foggy havened tear,
How could I think when it wasn't clear?

Rip me apart-What is there to hate?
Slaughtered little lamb of fate,
I hope-Harsh thoughtful bait,
It's dripping down-The time is late..

There is a time and a place,
An emotion shown in grace,
Facts thrown in my face,
Engulfed in tremors of black lace...

No more time to let me cry,
Emotions can be lead to a lie,
Holding back my touch-So high..
It's time to jump, so this time it's good bye....



-Dated as:0107110120

[Megamind's Minion]

sad

[Keena]

v.v Such a beautiful, sad piece.

[Senjou_Akira]

T.T such a sad piece..

[Princess Cupcake]

Loving the imagery of black lace. Maybe you could call it that?

[ELR]

Thank you for reading my poetry.

The image of black lace came from when i was a child, got stuck stuck in one of my mothers slips.. Imagine that and you can see someone in your head being trapped.