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    Default A Gardens Tale.

    When did you become, a broken flower?
    Twisting round and turning cold?

    When did you decide, to change your mind?
    Why was your decision, so quick, and bold?

    Did you stop to think for a minute
    About the rest of the garden?

    The weeds had begged for a day off
    And eventually, the'd been granted a pardon

    The trees had garnered us support,
    And abandoned their roots to attend.

    The sunflowers had opened, in the cold
    That it was summer, they had to pretend

    The soil grew sturdy, and vines descended
    The nettles, a perimeter around us, defended

    Our sky was smiling, your something blue
    The time leading up to the hour had flew

    Then you left me standing.
    A lonely tulip, without his rose

    I remember every feeling.
    The lows..and.. the lows..

    A nettle saw it first
    I too was turning brown.

    I was dying without you
    Couldn't hear a sound.

    So here I am
    In my final minute

    Wondering if it was just a game
    Were you in it to win it?

    Or did your feelings change
    Just like the seasons?

    I wonder as I lay here
    Slowly, freezing..
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    Default Re: A Gardens Tale.

    Wow... Words fail me. That was...wow. I feel dumb. Cant put words together. Your word usage and imagery was so powerful it turned my brain to mush.
    The fool sees the bend but doesn't look beyond it.


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    Default Re: A Gardens Tale.

    Thank you very much for your comment. But I want to see more work from Azul! I miss you.
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    Default Re: A Gardens Tale.

    *tear*
    I am no more a rose than I am its thorns.
    No more a gentle breeze than I am the hailing storm.
    I am no more hated than I am loved.
    And I am no more heartfilled than I am heartless.
    This is who I am.
    ~ELR

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    Default Re: A Gardens Tale.

    I made one trial poetry post but no one responded either cause it's jumbled or it stinks or both.
    The fool sees the bend but doesn't look beyond it.


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