I haven't written anything in a while so i'm rusty. Would like some honest feedback.
I'm sinking in mire
drowning in tears
darkness consumes me
feasts on my fears
Hanging on to a thread
for fear of letting go
screaming for help
held down by my foe
my strenght ebbs
my resolve breaks
i've lost my faith
overcome by heartaches
craving for the light
if only just a ray
reaching, grasping nothing
as the night blocks the day
my hatred abounds
corruption it spreads
washing over the land
rejoicing at the dead
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