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    Default Lost soul

    I haven't written anything in a while so i'm rusty. Would like some honest feedback.


    I'm sinking in mire
    drowning in tears
    darkness consumes me
    feasts on my fears


    Hanging on to a thread
    for fear of letting go
    screaming for help
    held down by my foe


    my strenght ebbs
    my resolve breaks
    i've lost my faith
    overcome by heartaches


    craving for the light
    if only just a ray
    reaching, grasping nothing
    as the night blocks the day


    my hatred abounds
    corruption it spreads
    washing over the land
    rejoicing at the dead
    Last edited by Azul; 01-28-2011 at 12:09 AM. Reason: Sorry my phone wont allow line between the paragraphs.
    The fool sees the bend but doesn't look beyond it.


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