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    Default Pit of Dark

    There stands a land so far away
    Where courage flows and evil frays
    Where the weak stand strong and the strong stand weak
    All together on the mountain peak
    The strong try and so they fail
    All alone oh so frail
    But what happens when the weak rise up
    To go on up and up
    Well they, So like a lark
    Will fall again into the pit of dark.

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    Default Re: Pit of Dark

    This is pretty good ^^ I love the rhyming you did in it. The only thing that turns me away from it is that you tried to rhyme "up" with "up" but other than that it was good! I hope to see more ^^

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Default Re: Pit of Dark

    Yeah nice rhyming. Up is a hard word to find good rhymes for. Sad how they are rising only to fall again.

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    Default Re: Pit of Dark

    Thank you. Means alot to have people say they like it.

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