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    Default One of the first things I ever wrote

    "Our Home"

    Theres this place
    off the coast
    along the beaches
    and on the shores

    and when the day is done
    the sun sets down
    it starts to glow
    when you get close

    and once the night has comee
    and when the light is done
    theres the moon
    and its ghost

    and for all we know
    and all we know
    is that we are
    very close

    to the only spot
    the perfect spot
    that we know
    as our home

    And on those beaches
    and on those shores
    there lie footprints
    of our ghosts

    and on these nights
    we walk through times
    that we shared
    all alone

    and with each breath
    we feel in our chests
    the feeling
    of the bold

    and through the dark
    we find the light
    trailing down the coast
    our hands held tight
    all through these nights
    we're a promise
    of pure gold

    this moments ours

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    Default Re: One of the first things I ever wrote

    Cool, it's pretty nice and catchy. Now I wonder, this is supposed to be a poem right? Because I feel like it's somewhat of a lyric or that's just me >.<
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    Default Re: One of the first things I ever wrote

    Quote Originally Posted by L. Anuket. View Post
    Cool, it's pretty nice and catchy. Now I wonder, this is supposed to be a poem right? Because I feel like it's somewhat of a lyric or that's just me >.<
    Well, it was a poem at first, but eventually, I put a tune to it aha.

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    Default Re: One of the first things I ever wrote

    I love the feeling I get from this n.n The rhythm is good too x3

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    Default Re: One of the first things I ever wrote

    Quote Originally Posted by Keena Aya Ashikaga View Post
    I love the feeling I get from this n.n The rhythm is good too x3
    Thank youu

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    Default Re: One of the first things I ever wrote

    wow, it gives that kind of feeling of home
    from the way it goes, it made me feel the poem too much.
    it's relaxing to read


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    Default Re: One of the first things I ever wrote

    Thanks!!!

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