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[Kaname Shikara]

I haven't written a poem in so long! So I wrote one tonight ^^ sorry, couldn't think of a title though.

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Through eternity
Frozen remained
How exactly
Am I to blame?

I'm always stuck
Wondering why
Nothing to do
Just sit and cry

Wondering how
It's this way
Nothing works
Feelings stay

How to stop it?
I don't know
They wont listen
No way to show

Respect is vital
In every life
So why cause
All this strife?

Confusion comes
Confusion goes
Sometimes it sticks
We don't know

But I do know...
Confusion runs me

[Anime-Prince]

A very deep and meaningful poem. I like the use of words, and the shorter sentences, it almost leaves a sense of confusion after the first read through, which is by no means a bad thing. You are, quite the poet.

[Kaname Shikara]

Thanks Anime Prince ^^

[Megamind's Minion]

i agree with AP that the start is kinda confusing...
why didn't you titled it Confusion?... it fits/...

[Kaname Shikara]

Ah, guess that would fit >.<; I couldn't think clearly at the time so I wasn't sure what to call it XD

[Megamind's Minion]

nice...

[Princess Cupcake]

I like your poems. The second stanza is my favorite. Believing in one's self often cures confusion. We're not going to understand everything you know?

[Kaname Shikara]

Thank you ^^ and yeah... >.< that is true.