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    I haven't written a poem in so long! So I wrote one tonight ^^ sorry, couldn't think of a title though.


    Untitled


    Through eternity
    Frozen remained
    How exactly
    Am I to blame?

    I'm always stuck
    Wondering why
    Nothing to do
    Just sit and cry

    Wondering how
    It's this way
    Nothing works
    Feelings stay

    How to stop it?
    I don't know
    They wont listen
    No way to show

    Respect is vital
    In every life
    So why cause
    All this strife?

    Confusion comes
    Confusion goes
    Sometimes it sticks
    We don't know

    But I do know...
    Confusion runs me

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    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Default Re: Untitled

    A very deep and meaningful poem. I like the use of words, and the shorter sentences, it almost leaves a sense of confusion after the first read through, which is by no means a bad thing. You are, quite the poet.

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    Thanks Anime Prince ^^

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
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    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Default Re: Untitled

    i agree with AP that the start is kinda confusing...
    why didn't you titled it Confusion?... it fits/...

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    Default Re: Untitled

    Ah, guess that would fit >.<; I couldn't think clearly at the time so I wasn't sure what to call it XD

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    Default Re: Untitled

    nice...

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    Default Re: Untitled

    I like your poems. The second stanza is my favorite. Believing in one's self often cures confusion. We're not going to understand everything you know?

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    Thank you ^^ and yeah... >.< that is true.

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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