The Song (I Used to Love)

[Ellxeeva]

I
Wednesday night
Lying in bed
Wide awake
I couldn’t sleep

The radio is on
Waiting for my favorite song…

II
Then I froze
Stared at nothing
Heartbeat fast
I closed my eyes

Silently listened
To the song that I used to love…

I thought I moved on
But I was wrong
There’s still meaning
When I heard that song

III
Feeling down
I held my pillow
Wet with tears
I hugged it tight

Now I realize
A wound may heal, but there’s still a scar…

IV
Every word
I shed a tear
Couldn’t stop
The heartache’s back

Aching, stinging, like
A thousand needles through my heart…

I thought I moved on
But I was wrong
There’s still meaning
When I heard that song

Illusions in a flash
Haunted by recall
Memories coming back
Tearing me to the core

I thought the pain’s gone
But I am wrong
Tears went flowing
As I write the final words of this song

[TadashiED]

Really good! It has a very deep meaning which most people can relate too. My favourite part would have to be the chorus?

"I thought I moved on
But I was wrong
There’s still meaning
When I heard that song"

This is a very honest line, as most likely 90% of the people in the world feel this way...
If not, it relates to me at the very least...

Thanks for post

[Senjou_Akira]

i remember someone there haha, it was good and moving.
is this really a song?

[Anuket]

*Wipes tears out of her eyes* X'3

That was really good, I really loved it. It absolutely brought memories back... I would love to hear it as an actual song though!

[TenguSan]

wonderful! Very well done!!

i used to be like that for so long too.. every time i hear a song on the radio or while i am in a store, i would start to tear up.... although it was more remembering pain rather then remembering love..... even still

[Ellxeeva]

Thank you for the comments. ^_^
Yeah, it's supposed to be a song, unfortunately the person who's supposed to give music to my lyrics is.. Mehh. -___-
Though, I really wish I could find someone who wants to. >__<