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    I ask for criticism, I do not mind harsh words if it does not work well, all I ask is read, enjoy, and write (if you wish) your thoughts of what you read, and to write what could be fixed. Thank you, my friends. *bow*

    Untitled..

    There is a time and a place,
    An emotion shown in grace,
    Facts thrown in my face,
    Engulfed in tremors of black lace...

    What could I have seen there?
    As I had reached out in fear,
    To lose it in this foggy havened tear,
    How could I think when it wasn't clear?

    Rip me apart-What is there to hate?
    Slaughtered little lamb of fate,
    I hope-Harsh thoughtful bait,
    It's dripping down-The time is late..

    There is a time and a place,
    An emotion shown in grace,
    Facts thrown in my face,
    Engulfed in tremors of black lace...

    No more time to let me cry,
    Emotions can be lead to a lie,
    Holding back my touch-So high..
    It's time to jump, so this time it's good bye....



    -Dated as:0107110120
    I am no more a rose than I am its thorns.
    No more a gentle breeze than I am the hailing storm.
    I am no more hated than I am loved.
    And I am no more heartfilled than I am heartless.
    This is who I am.
    ~ELR

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    Default Re: Untitled...

    sad

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    Default Re: Untitled...

    v.v Such a beautiful, sad piece.

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    T.T such a sad piece..


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    Loving the imagery of black lace. Maybe you could call it that?

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    Thank you for reading my poetry.

    The image of black lace came from when i was a child, got stuck stuck in one of my mothers slips.. Imagine that and you can see someone in your head being trapped.
    I am no more a rose than I am its thorns.
    No more a gentle breeze than I am the hailing storm.
    I am no more hated than I am loved.
    And I am no more heartfilled than I am heartless.
    This is who I am.
    ~ELR

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