Light and Dark
Note: this poem is a sonnet I wrote
Stuck with this choice from the very start
Looking for answers I soar higher
Within my eyes is a burning fire
Stuck between light and dark
Intertwined never to be apart
Stuck with the choice of shadow and light
As the shadow frights and the light excites
But from the dark we end and we start
Light is right and dark is a sin
We make this choice from within
For light and dark are counterparts
In my mind is where I depart
On this road that I take
Could give me life or life it takes.
The poem is pretty good. Mostly when you said "Stuck between light and dark
Intertwined never to be apart Stuck with the choice of shadow and light
As the shadow frights and the light excites" I thought heck, that's good stuff haha. But, I think this is in the wrong thread section. =\
thank you kindly, but what do you mean the wrong section?
Originally Posted by Xieshunnuan
WHOA I thought i put this in poetry :banghead: :laugh:
Yeah, you need to post it in poetry.
And a sonnet, that's a bit new around here. I could feel it, though, not entirely overwhelming. I can understand it, as far as the metaphors go.
I say you did a good job as you kept with the sonnet form generally, I wasn't totally counting.
xD yeah, that's why i said I think this is in the wrong thread section. But it's not a problem. Happend to me a long back while and people was an *** for giving me tons of bad rep even when I put, "Oh crap opz, if it's in the wrong section move please?"