I feel as if there’s an empty space there now…
You know, where I used to hold you in my heart??
I feel as if I need you, but I really don’t
I just perceive it as that since you were there for me since the beginning…
Well first day of school that is
I feel as if I am empty, but what actually fills me up, is this:
When I don’t have you on my mind…
Isn’t it weird and ironic that I could want you so bad
then turn around and say that not thinking about you keeps me happy??
It’s not at all weird to me
I can’t think about you cause you make me feel
as if I had the greatest thing in the world
and I gave it you up just because I would be disobeying my parents
I would call that a deep story, and if you knew what went behind it you would too
now is that classified as poetry?? o.O i don't know if it's just a short story or what but i just felt as if i should right it out, before i didn't feel that way anymore ^^' so whatever. If it's not poetry, feel free to delete it, i already have it written down. And if it is poetry ^_^ tell me what you think about it kay?? lol
I like it! ^_^ I'd post mine here too if not for the adverse effects of Copy-and-paste scams. And yes, at the least it's free-verse poetry.
thats a good poem, I like it... did you make it your self?
thanks for the compliments, ^_^ oh and yea i made it myself...I write poetry from time to time so...yea ^^'