*Mmm...! I'm still on a darkling streak...But I haven't written a majority of "happy poems" in my time as a member of this forum. LOL. This little creation is another one of my half-alive half-in-reality inklings of the mind. Have you ever had a day where you feel you're not "all there" or simply..."Slightly Hollow"? Well...This poem is for you.*
*Dedicated to the world's slowly vanishing souls...I see you...Come back through the looking glass...Shadows don't suit you.*
Oct 3, 2006 at 11:52 pm
Broken heart where can you be?
Shattered and scattered which blind eyes cannot see.
Chained hands reach without avail...
Bloodless and loveless contained in skin so pale.
Half a mind and a mind so rotten...
Twisted and torn, I am but forgotten.
Silence this deadman's voice in its throat.
Tears to a river become a corpse afloat.
Slighty hollow, not here nor there...
Simply amissed by society's vicous stare...
Tear this life asunder for I will not care...
Because living so tornly is more than I can bear...
Wonderful Poem. I think a lot of people have had a "Slightly Hollow" day before. Keep writing.. I hope to see more, dark or happy.
You know you write beautiful poems, yes?
I think you stalk me, a'cause this poem seems so much like me on most days.
-Lick. Stalk. Love.- <3
Eye el yew, gurlfrenduh. xD
Keep up the good work, lovely. =D
(Side note; You think I should post my latest fanfiction? O.o; The VxI one? IM me on MSN and tell me. >_<)
Wow... this gives me... flourishing inspiration >.< You're so talented Otaku-oni-chan!
The first paragraph... how do I describe this... it's like 'beyond dejavu'... make any sense? Duuuuude. I'm shaking with ummm excitement.... ya know like when you're watching a suspenseful movie? I'd love you to read my newest poem and give me constructive critisism and insight. But I can't open threads... my computer is messed up that way... >.<
~Skyla-chan xoxo [thank you for posting]