Are you trying to fool me?
Are you cheating on me?
Tell the truth.
Look at me.
or say no.
Just answer me,
Don't go off the subject!
Your making me even mad.
Don't turn your back on me.
Not unless you said yes,
In your own way.
So you cheated on me?
You did didn't you...
No? Then tell me the truth.
Yes...I want to hear your answer..
Hope this is ok. Enjoy everyone~
Very straight forward in a creative way. Good job.
Alot of people have those same feelings and thoughts
so I think you'll get alot of commpliments.:p Keep it up.
Thank You Lilium. And don't worry. I will. ^ ^
Love it! Keep up the good work.
Don't be disguraged if not many people comment, their just brain dead zombies who don't know good work when they see it!
I don't really care if others doesnt read it Yuri-chan. lol
And Thank You for reading my poem. You also comment it as well. Thanks!
What happened Sakura-chan? Hope this poem won't relate to things in real life. Anyway, this poem is very creative too. ^ ^ Me likey.
Well, yes. I was with my friend and...her boyfriend...and well.. things..got bad. I was in the middle of the fight...and when I mean...in the middle....I was the wall.. =.=
Anyways. Thanks for reading my poem Lucky. ^ ^
oh lol, you were the wall? >.< Anyway, very straight forward, emotional poem : D yay, it is good.
nice poem, but i'll express my reply in the form of a clue guess
your lover, in the bedroom, with the gardener lol jk
Yes Mystic..I was the wall...
Thanks everyone! I really apreciate the comments.