Goshawk's Fanart

Hello,
Im not a profesional drawer or anything of this kind
but I would like to show you what im drawing while i have free time to spare.

First of all i have to say sorry for bad lights...
I cant do much about it since pictures are taken when its dark outside :O

http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/8...00189v0.th.jpghttp://img808.imageshack.us/img808/9...c00011r.th.jpghttp://img262.imageshack.us/img262/3...00012js.th.jpg
http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/8...00145q0.th.jpghttp://img812.imageshack.us/img812/6...c00140i.th.jpghttp://img819.imageshack.us/img819/5...00131m0.th.jpghttp://img257.imageshack.us/img257/5...00104rb.th.jpghttp://img836.imageshack.us/img836/7...c00196w.th.jpg
some of them are older than the other ones but I have to say that I started drawing Manga/Anime in February of this Year.

Any advices are welcome because I really need them.
If I could I'll post new pictures in this thread
If you dont like something in my pictures feel free to write, i would really appreciate it.

Im currently using Mechanical Pencil 0.5 , and pencils (from B to 6B)
Btw Im so sorry for my english its because I have to learn it alone

You sir are a good artist. These drawings are pretty good.
Keep up the good work ♪

These are amazing. Great job on the Ah! My Goddess angel/goddess scene. I also really like the second picture of the boy.

these are very good im very impressed good job!

They're pretty good, considering you're technically still a beginner. All I can say is, keep practicing, practice makes perfect!
You could use more shading to give it a more 3D aspect. And don't you have a scanner?

Thank You all for answers.
As I promised here are new ones.

And to questions:
-Shading hmm I was trying to use it. But after work it was giving me worser effect than I expected it to be..
and I know that without shading I wont go any further, so I'm kinda stuck in here

and second one
-Scanner unfortunately I do not own a one, and there's no one around me who could have a one :(
http://imgur.com/LrGay.jpg
http://imgur.com/FcWGS.jpg

@Edit
Kanjoudakai_Ira, so I've got another pic with shading to show how it looks like
http://imgur.com/leeci.jpg