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Wow those are real cool Kami can you do one for me Of DragonBall Z with Goku Super Sayian 4 PLZ ^___^
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To be honest...they're a little repetitive. It's all vector and checkerboards, not that that's a bad thing though. I'd like to see you try something new, like clipping masks, C4D's, smudging, or something. I still <3 the Dimentio one though.
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Hyphen
To be honest...they're a little repetitive. It's all vector and checkerboards, not that that's a bad thing though. I'd like to see you try something new, like clipping masks, C4D's, smudging, or something. I still <3 the Dimentio one though.
Thanks for your honest opinion Hyphen, all the ones that say proto are my first attempt at that style using a tutorial. Anyways I am going to try to make a C4D signature this weekend. Also thanks for the Dimentio comment. ^_^
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I LOVE your Dimentio signature!!!! Paper Mario is one of my favorite games! :D I like how Diddy Kong pops out in his signature too. In some of your signatures, the image's quality doesn't work with the signature's effects. You always want to try to make sure that you can make the image and the effects look like they are of the same quality in a signature, because then the signature, as a whole, looks great for quality.
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The effects are cool, but the text is kind of hard to read, and the image looks a little dull. Some of the light strikes look out of place as well. It definitely does not look like a finished signature, but the background looks great and you doing "noise" right, which a lot of people do wrong.
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Aleyna
The effects are cool, but the text is kind of hard to read, and the image looks a little dull. Some of the light strikes look out of place as well. It definitely does not look like a finished signature, but the background looks great and you doing "noise" right, which a lot of people do wrong.
Yup, I am. Anyways I knew the green light thing look awkward but I guess I should do some more edits. Anyways here is another one that I took as a request from our very own DragonSoul.
#9 Goku Vector Style, Signature
http://i1176.photobucket.com/albums/...onSoulBeta.png
I can still edit this one so suggestions are welcomed.
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I like the lining outside the image on the signature. I wish I could give you some advice on your signatures, because you seem to enjoy doing a vector style for your signatures, and you have a lot of potential. I am horrible at doing pretty much anything vector, whether it's adding vector brushes or using a vector image such as a cartoon or anime character. I recommend maybe asking @Hyphen: for some advice, because he is pretty good with vectors and enjoys working with video game images.
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Okay, you asked for it =p
I'll comment on the last sig you made, the Goku one. It's pretty clean and I like frame-lines you put around the char. The render/extraction itself could use a little more sharpening though.
The elements in thebackground don't convince me. The way you placed them isn't much creative nor symmetric. It doesn't have any particular flow in it, so I'd advise you to work a little more on that. Plus the arrows in the bottom don't stand out much because of the darker grey blocks they're placed on top of.
The text is alright, but if I were you I'd drag the "Soul" a little closer (upper-right) to "Dragon". Plus if you were to position the whole text part, maybe even resized a little, closer to the char, it could balance out the sig.
On and the black border isn't suitable for a sig with such a light color scheme. Pick a color from the background or the char, instead!
In all, you've done a nice job! Keep it up
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Trinity Muse
Okay, you asked for it =p
I'll comment on the last sig you made, the Goku one. It's pretty clean and I like frame-lines you put around the char. The render/extraction itself could use a little more sharpening though.
The elements in thebackground don't convince me. The way you placed them isn't much creative nor symmetric. It doesn't have any particular flow in it, so I'd advise you to work a little more on that. Plus the arrows in the bottom don't stand out much because of the darker grey blocks they're placed on top of.
The text is alright, but if I were you I'd drag the "Soul" a little closer (upper-right) to "Dragon". Plus if you were to position the whole text part, maybe even resized a little, closer to the char, it could balance out the sig.
On and the black border isn't suitable for a sig with such a light color scheme. Pick a color from the background or the char, instead!
In all, you've done a nice job! Keep it up
^Pretty much. I just think that for it to be a vector sig the font is really boring.
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Now that looks nicer, especially the text! Good job!
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I actually find your works rather attractive when it comes to simplicity. I think you should make the images look a little crisper, get what I mean?
Even how simple it is, do a little artsy look to it by using some (more) textures. ^_^ Keep it up, I wanna see more of your stuff.
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Kami i love the Sigs you did for Ghost 24 they are some real nice work i like the first one but i would make the Name on the sig more like See able you know other than that it looks amazing
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The third one is definitely the best. The second one doesn't have good flow and the first one's texture is just... not for me.
The text could be a different font. Maybe a tech-ier font?
Anyway, the third Ghost tag is quite nice. Good blending, nice light source, and not oversharpened. It's a good improvement from your previous posts. Nice job!
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Thanks Aleyna, I'm glad you visit my thread frequently anyways...
Oh it is no problem, because I love looking at artwork. :)
Oh my gosh! I love all the experimenting you did with you newest image to make signatures into! I can tell that you have been having fun, hehe. I can experiment forever on Photoshop and never get bored. It's really good to experiment and show what you did whether you think it is good or not, because you can spark new ideas for people and get some good advice! ^_^
The 3rd signature is definitely the best. The lighting look great. I actually think you could of tried blending all 3 background effects and made an epic looking signature, but nonetheless, this is some great work!
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Your signature's dimensions won't work with that style, unless you were to add many, many more effects. Try to make a signature with the same dimensions as the Naruto one for better results.
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You should try something new. I'm starting to see some repetitive styles with lining the images, similiar vector brushes and designs, and I seeing you starting to develop a pattern with noise. It's nice to develop a certain style, but using it or doing the same thing constantly can appear boring.
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Okay I retried the wallpaper and it looks better in my opinion but I would still love suggestions for improvement, and I will try something new as soon as I have more chances to learn some techniques and whatnot. This also looks very nice on my PSP except when the stupid icons are covering it. >_>
#1 Extra, PSP Wallpaper
http://i1182.photobucket.com/albums/...lpaperBeta.png