Beautiful Misery.

A first spring rain,
A first flower's bloom,
A love that comes from pain.

Beauty, this is-
I want it to myself, call me selfish.

A first winter storm,
A first love reborn,
A soldier proudly marching in his uniform.

This is beauty-
I want to hold onto it all, and never let it leave.

A last goodbye,
A final breath before one dies,
A life filled with nothing but lies.

Beauty, this is not

Misery, is what it is

I claim I want it all

But Misery, I do not want.

This a great poem sis. :)

Thanks! :)

This is so great! Very heartbreaking and beautiful.

Aw, thanks, Rolo! :)

I love it! It has an awesome rhythm to it and I like the way how you used spring.

Please keep on writing!

Interesting poem. You have your own format in your poems and i don't think i've seen it before. It's positively unique. The poem sort of has an air of nonchalance but also emotional at the same time. I liked it a lot.

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Originally Posted by LOVE STUFF

I love it! It has an awesome rhythm to it and I like the way how you used spring.

Please keep on writing!

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I will keep on writing, thank you! :)

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Originally Posted by [email protected]

Interesting poem. You have your own format in your poems and i don't think i've seen it before. It's positively unique. The poem sort of has an air of nonchalance but also emotional at the same time. I liked it a lot.

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Well, thank you. ^^ As always, your words motivate me to write more. :)

Wow, really a great poem dude

It was a beautiful misery,
won my heart like a glamorous victory.

bravo after a long time nice one kirei

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Originally Posted by sandyewillson

Wow, really a great poem dude

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Thanks! ^^

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Originally Posted by ultra_maniac

It was a beautiful misery,
won my heart like a glamorous victory.

bravo after a long time nice one kirei

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Aww, thanks! :)