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Black and White
The war begins and the sides are drawn
One bent on destruction
The other on construction
Pick your side and follow your heart
Be it that your heart says to kill and main
And embrace the darkness and all it’s pain
Or go to the light
Save everyone at the cost of your body
Give everything for the survival of others
The two sides of every heart
Only those balanced can decide
I enjoyed reading this one, I wonder why no one left a comment. The title is what threw me off the most, are you talking about how things are seen, like good and evil? Things that are shown in black and white can be misunderstood. I liked how you had placed the rhyming scheme as a ABB style (Reminder, I do not know many poetry terms). I do hope you keep writing, my friend.
this is a very deep poem
i like the message it sends
why didnt anyone,comment??
anyway.....very, good poem strong message and good rhymes to it
Are we all forced too comment on every poem?
Anyways it was a decent poem with a decent flow, wasn't the best nor was it the worst. I liked the feel it had and if you ever wanna post more I'll attempt too comment. Good Luck.
hah, yea. We're all forced to comment. XD
It was a very good short poem; I liked it! ^^
I hope you continue to write and post and, like Raiken, I'll also attempt to comment. =)