Hiiiiiiiii
i drew a sweet lolita
i know it's not perfect..it's my first time drawing lolita :rolleyes: sooo..be mercifull with your comments :Bump:
http://www.castle-anime.org/uploads/...cdfba23ae5.jpg
sooo what do you think??? :closedeye
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Hiiiiiiiii
i drew a sweet lolita
i know it's not perfect..it's my first time drawing lolita :rolleyes: sooo..be mercifull with your comments :Bump:
http://www.castle-anime.org/uploads/...cdfba23ae5.jpg
sooo what do you think??? :closedeye
so kawaii...mhm love the brown hair...hmm keep up the good work ms. tsukinowa...:)~lhize
are you on deviant art?
ohh, thats pretty nice... and pretty haha
oh wow this is fantastic u color well aswell
Ah, I love it. x3 Its awesome.
That's pretty nice.. Since it's your first time I'm sure you'll draw better than this next time.. I'm looking forward for the next piece! So, you do have a DA account, don't you? Can I have yours? Maybe we can be friends in DA.. XD
How sweet!
Looks soooooooo CUTE!
Wow.
It is so pretty!
I love it.
I also love the colors you chose for it<3
It's so good for your first time.
Compared to your drawings, I REALLY need to work on
my skills. Haha:]
Very talented! I would suggest you to keep making drawings like this one :) i love it!
The good:
You did a marvellous job on the umbrella which could give even seasoned artists trouble with perspective.
The dress is very well drawn and the folds in the fabric don't look fake.
It's an accurate depiction of the candy lolita style.
Things to work on:
Her legs need work. Placement of the knee lines is irregular, and a girl's legs are more curvy rather than straight lines. The curves are usually defined by narrowness at the knees and the shape of the thighs and calves.
Something about her neck seems too thick. It could be the way her hair is drawn, but it makes her shoulders and neck look broad instead of slender and dainty as the lolita usually is.
More time could be spent on a more dazzling background.
Overall, a very admirable and beautiful piece of art. Keep up the good work!
nice post....
aw i love the coloring on her x3
She looks really cute. Her shoes are bothering me a bit though xP
You did good ^^