I've been putting this off for ages, but what with the update and everything, I'll go ahead and start one. Feel free to comment, critique, or anything else! So here goes a few things. I'm such a noob at this stuff xD
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I've been putting this off for ages, but what with the update and everything, I'll go ahead and start one. Feel free to comment, critique, or anything else! So here goes a few things. I'm such a noob at this stuff xD
Wow that looks so kewl. Right now I'm like =O! Best computer art I could probably do is stick people. lolz >.<
I'm definitely not an expert at this stuff, but there a couple things I'd like to point out.
The first one is really nice. I absolutely love the vector work and the sleek design. The only thing I don't really care for is the fading wire frame. I guess, to me, a wire frame is a solid structure so it shouldn't fade like that. I'm not exactly sure if that's what my problem is; I just think it'd look better without the fade. XD
On the Wii-mote one: It looks like you've made a light beam from the end of it toward the top. Am I right? If I'm not then just ignore me. If I am right, then maybe you could make that beam stand out a bit more.
And the planets piece: Maybe the noise in Saturn's rings could be lowered, but otherwise this is epic!
All of them are really awesome, honestly. I'm just being picky. :P
Great job, man.
Whoa.. they're awesome! You got any tips for someone wanting to do that kind of art themselves?
I like the wii one =P its so epic but im not sure with the first one D= cause i have the same stock as you do XD
Thanks for the comments guys! I was cleaning out my stuff earlier, and found my old 3DS Max stuff. Man I wish I still had it...But yeah, here's a few of my old renders. I'm pretty sure they're not perfect (seeing as I don't have Vray or anything).
Cool, the lighting is a bit dull, and some of the objects could use a bit of texturing to make them look more realistic. But all in all, good compositions.
Wow, I love your 3D work!
As Serated said, the only thing I would change are the lights ^^
I don't want my thread to die yet ;_;
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Aaand yeah. Continuing with my Wiimotes. I actually think I'll stop here, it's hard to work with fire, and I can't think of an element for yellow or an alternate one for red. but yeah.
Thissss thread is dyingggggg D;
I didn't get to finish the rest of my renders yet, so I'll post those in a week or so. Max is really killing me now but my teacher doesn't give me much of a choice at this point. I still can't get my lighting right, but it's....better? But yeah! I need Vray >_>
I loved the wiimote one. I don't really have much to say about it. For the first Max one it looks really cool, except I'm not sure if the reflections are right. I love the second one, except shouldn't the shadows on the ceiling be black? I'm also not a huge fan of the texture on the railing =/
I just needed to stop by and say how much I love your newest Wiimote piece. Not really anything else to say about that... XD
Thanks for the comments guys! And There's not much I can do to the shadows, AG it's Max's fault >_>. I just model, light, and texture things, and Max calculates it for me :D. BUT a few more things today including my first Vector. It was for the illuminated spirits, but I was too late D; Also, my newest 3DS Max house. With that done I'll need a new project. ;_;Anyway, enjoy.Attachment 33963Attachment 33962Attachment 33964
=o I love the Abstract one. The faint diagonal lines really adds a sense of rhythm, although I'm not quite sure about that hook that goes through the t. I'm not a huge fan of the pumpkin one, the shadows on the pumpkin are too crooked and the cast shadow seems oddly shaped. Although the shadows on the stump looks nice. I don't have much to say about the Max one, it looks cool.
Compress your 3DSM renders please, I don't like to (and didn't) wait for 8 MB+ images to load.
I have to say, the ones of the planets are, to me, pretty much breathtaking. Pictures of planets like that have always made me happy. Nice work~
Okay Cante. Smaller (but still pretty huge) sized Max renders.
Haven't seen 3D max stuff in a while. Only issue I see is the clipping on the door in the first pic.
There's so much wrong in that first shot, but I'm glad no one noticed it (yet). xD
Do I smell a challenge? I'll list what I find.
1. Door
2. Pot on table levitates.
3. See if you can beat 2. :p
You should create a topic is slightly messed up rooms and see how many people can find. Maybe update with a new one every week.
That sounds like fun, I'll have to get clearance and see if I can. But there's more than that as well :p
First, in the second to last sentence of my post, man did I butcher the English language. Second, it'd probably go in misc and I doubt Eris would mind. And third, I'm far from the most perceptive person you'll ever meet. Unless textures count I have nothing.
I went back and fixed the last shot so you could tell the difference. Unfortunately...I forgot to compress it and it's 7mb now >_>;
Right. So I really really really REALLY need some opinions on which of these teapots look best. I'll take critique as well, but I know you guys are lazy =P
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