Just a haiku.

Smile. Look outside,
Look at the world around you.
Live. Love. Laugh. Always.

Short, sweet, and fulfilling. Just the way a Haiku should be. Nice.

it has 16 syllables,does haiku only have 15?
but,wow! it has such a nice message,good work!

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Originally Posted by dream magician

it has 16 syllables,does haiku only have 15?
but,wow! it has such a nice message,good work!

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A haiku has seventeen, I believe.
Five,
Seven,
Five.
And with the way I pronounce words... it was seventeen for me.

Thank you, though. =]

Yes..I like this haiku it has meaning!!

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Originally Posted by vixen_wolf

:Quote: I love catnip mice...it's why i chew there heads off. there good for breakfast :unQuote: bucky

:Qoute: 1..2..3..4..5.. that was a haiku a freaky little cat haiku :unQoute: rob

this is from get fuzzy i love that comic.....its in there first book..bucky is sho cooooool

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What was the point of posting that?

And thank you, ?~Silk_kitsune~?.

such a sweet poem..i loved it!!

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Originally Posted by ~*Lady_Kikyou*~

such a sweet poem..i loved it!!

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I'm glad to hear that! =D

seems that you're pretty good at it, Nice poem, just the way haiku's should be

Yeah,i admit i was wrong....even so thank you for correcting me.
nice haiku,you could be like Basho,you know.

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Originally Posted by dream magician

Yeah,i admit i was wrong....even so thank you for correcting me.
nice haiku,you could be like Basho,you know.

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Not a problem!~ Thank you for ... well ... being nice! =] And I don't really know Basho. ;[

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Originally Posted by Charmmy

Not a problem!~ Thank you for ... well ... being nice! =] And I don't really know Basho. ;[

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You could be better than basho. Looking forward to read more sensible haikus from you. Keep it up.! ^^

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Originally Posted by seraphic_demon

You could be better than basho. Looking forward to read more sensible haikus from you. Keep it up.! ^^

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Awh, that's really sweet. I still wish I knew him but I'm too lazy to wiki/google/yahoo.

Tehee.