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man .... why is always like this ... always ... I always get the best inspiration in wallmaking during the exam period x_X
Anyway, since my main source for suggestions (aka Muz) is on holidays (damn you, I also want holidays), I thought why not posting and ask for suggestions here.
Key, here's the wall, don't mind the roof for now, still need to finish re-cging it. Just let me know what do you think about the bg, and the streetlight?
Hello, that rely look grate, if u get the re-cging dun =), the bg is tely nice, and the light...well maybe it schud eluminate somting? and not only shine in the dark, mabe...
the caracter is a rely nic jobb, did u re cg it to?
Best of luck
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Is that ying-yang on the moon intentional?
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Originally Posted by Redfield22
wow! that looks great! i thought you did a totally GREAT job!!!!!
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Originally Posted by Baka Fish
the character is kinda bright abd its night time so maybe you should use lighting affects. also u dont have your name or email on it. u should have one of them on or it could get stolen. trust me it has happend before to my fullmetal wall. everything else is good except the stars look kind of computer generated.
Well, Fishy, my dear. I think your moon looks rather more like a golfball then a moon. And I'm ignoring the roof as you asked. hmmm...The light is excellent.
As for the rest of the bg, it looks good to me. Can't wait to see the finished product!
Hahahaha .... that ying-yang stuff was surelly random xD was never planing to make one xD
About my name on it .... I just haven't added it ... will do, when it's finished, among with other stuff
Hm, lightninng effects ... will think off. Should I change the streetlight color to white, or maybe a blueish one?
As for Re-CGing, will be done after today's exam x_X, there's still a part of the roof missing (currently the part in black), and I need to fix a bit the window (I failed the perspective).
And Myrra, you are the 2nd person that thinks the moon is awkward .... actually, it is. Need to try something different.
Edit: btw, the stars will stay as they are now ... hai, I've used an old starfield I made, reduced the brightness and increased the contrast, and made it less dense ...
what u guys mean buy re-cging. like what program you use to do that. i know what vectoring is because im learning to do that but im not sure if re-cging is the same thing. if u are going to change the moon there is this tutorial i found. http://www.embrazer.com/tutorial/moon.php
Re-CGing ... to redraw the missing parts, to correct the low quality parts of an image. Vectoring may also be considered CGing, altho CGing isn't the same as vectoring.
Hehe lookin good wizzy, dropping by to say hi xD. Anyways abck to the wally ^^
You know me, I like space/star backgrounds so I'm picky on those xD. First off, I think one part of the moon looks weird. Part of the shadows on the right side makes it look like it's not really spherical. Also, I think you should varie the stars more. Make some of them brighter and some not to bright, maybe add some shooting star streaks and some bright stars in some places, but don't overcomplicate it. Keep it fairly simple :) Also on the moon, maybe enhance the shadows a bit by giving them more depth ^^.
As for the streetlight, I think a more intense bluish white would be good, haven't tried it myself though ^^;
Good luck on the re-CG. Can't wait to see how this turns out :)
mhm sorry Blue boy .... no shooting stars >_> I want the sky to be minimalistic (that's why I also reduced the brightness and increased the contrast of my starfield - remember the Odyssey 2005 wallpaper? - without the big explosion) I want the bg style to fit with the char drawing style (which is quite a pain ... since I'm no good with drawing) ...
Edit: altho ... a second thought ... the stars should be a lil brighter at the top .... in the darker part ...
Lol alright that's fine, but you should still vary then a bit at the least. It looks really...flat. =/
This is a beautiful wallpaper. The use of color on the girl is terrific, and the uneven lines of her and the roof are great.
My only suggestion is that the yellow streetlight doesn't match the color of anything else in the wallpaper. If you made it the pale yellow of the house windows, or (better) the pale blue of the bottom fringe of the girl's dress, that might work better.