Hikarin
Senior Member

tsk tsk Hikarin, get more sleep =D the entire "Rewrite of the Life ima buchikowase" stanza, as well as everything after it, is in the imperative mood, i.e. second-person command ;D so there shouldn't be any I's or my's there. =)

With that said, I would probably translate "ima buchikowase Kirei na uso de katameta Mask" as "Shatter that mask consolidated with beautiful lies".

But that "Yume no hate nare no hate shogyou mujou" is a toughie. Three nominal phrases without any particles or verbs... Something like "At the end of our dream, we'll be merely a shadow of our former selves. Everything is transient and impermanent." Maybe? XD

Well, about the english problem we have about the same thing over here. But it tend to be like that when people who moves to an country stay "sticked together! and they move to neighbourhoods where it doesn't live any one with the native language who can speak with them. It's their own faults that they don't get good at the language where they are staying but I think that even if it where their decision to move to a place use should be able to decide a little more about those things, or else you will be having a lot of people who have lived in a place for almost twenty years - but barely even can say "hi" probarly.... >_< Sure, if I would've move somewhere abroad sometime I would prefer to move to a neighbourhood where it lives other swedish people but then I would understand if someone would force me to get to know the language a little more

I think the story is good as always, but the music (melody) this time is on the shaky side, and didn't sound as good as most of mothy's pieces...

I like the differtent way gods are shown. Im going to write an comparative essay on that.
Ill read ur book later and tell u what I think
Ive always loved writing too.

yay! mothy's 6th sin, sloth (眠らせ姫からの贈り物) has been out for a week, and I only found out today? >.>
so yea, I went ahead and put it under the VOS section, as soon as it's out in an album, you can once again continue your monopolization of the mothy section =D

Spot on! You think? I don't agree with you because I see sentences that is built wrong or words are are spelled in the wrong way but... I don't think I am so bad anyway. But flawless? No baby doll ~ not yet

my home resembles these pictues:http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedi...003_Sweden.JPG
http://www.akersrolls.com/upload/%C3...s%20Sweden.jpg
http://www.google.se/imgres?imgurl=h...w=1280&bih=650

Why?
Cause I am bored shitless, nearly dead from my sicknesss, and, in fact, I like making friends.
I never got the hang of lyric writing however I am a poet and writer and Norse Mytholgy is infact my favourite.

Hows the book going? Are u going to publish or just amatuer work?
R u a boy or girl?

Yeah I think I have heard that about the eucalyptus leafs somewhere... I don't know either why we call them for bears, but we surely do that anyway! But maybe it's because they do look little like teddybears? I guess that is an possible answer to that question anyway. I don't even know what a wombat is: I have to google it. ^^ [...] Alright now I have but I don't feel smarter for that. Don't think I ever have seen that animal before actually. :S Wombat... hmpfh. Looks like an guinea-pig if you ask me. You have never seen that movie? Seriously? Oh shame on you for that! *face palm* trailer: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jVrjCyPhoxE watch online: http://www.letmewatchthis.ch/watch-1...ers-Down-Under

I am from Sweden, so I live fairly long away from you. ^_^

LOL....
Its delibrate.
So... Who r u?
Tell me about urself.

Decided on who to cosplay as yet?