Forum: Poetry

It's already hard enough for you. You don't need me to slow you down. I'm a mess and all I'll ever do is, tear you down to your weakest state. So pretend I never existed anyway. I boarded up my windows, so I could never be tricked by the light of day, because outside isn't real anyway....

Ok, so this is something I wrote some time back and I just want a little feedback on it. I know I'm amateur but you can give some advice! Thanks! :) I look back even though I think I shouldn't, I smile a while, then I keep on running, Towards what, I don't know. I can't exactly see where...

I have a tune for it too! Ahah. I wrote this song because there was someone whom i used to be close with but due to some circumstances, she moved away and I haven't seen her since. She was a very important person to me and I would give anything to see her again...cheesy I know xD but those...

The surface of the sun is not too far For me to reach up a hand, And turn down the intensity If it will please your eyes. The water is not too deeply filling For me to swim to the bottom And take an unknown stone If with you, it'd create surprise.

No more I'd wish to think, Even less I would require- A furnishing of sin For this carnal desire And even less I'd ponder No more could I judge, Significance be less No more than a nudge

Um... Here goes nothing? :) I want your eyes to see only me, I want to have you for myself because I don't like sharing, When I have you in the palm of my hands I'll strike like a tigress and make you mine. You see, I don't like the way you talk about 'her' when I'm around,

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"Our Home" Theres this place off the coast along the beaches and on the shores and when the day is done the sun sets down it starts to glow

I wrote this a while back.. It's not very good but I hope you guys enjoy it at least. It was for a very special person who would have never known what it would have meant. ----- My Guardian Angel You are my Guardian Angel, The protector of my sky, A star that twinkles; you’re that bright....

Electrical surges Of confident energy Alert, ready waiting Like karma-serenity You stand strong and proud Like an age old sentry Of courage and drive

Attempting greatness With endless potential Exploring the world An adventure's essential Bring on the sea I'll swim for miles The biggest cliff?

I'm here on my break Eating some bread, Thinking there's hours Of work left ahead. I'm tired of working I'd rather dance instead, But in life I'll never dance Like I do inside my head.

Please critique as harsh or as easily as you choose, but please enjoy what you read if you can please. ---------------- Tombstone Night sky that shines down tonight, Bless all who seem to be in sight, Wash these tears that sting like a bite, Turn all the fear into something bright. Just...

I Wednesday night Lying in bed Wide awake I couldn’t sleep The radio is on Waiting for my favorite song… II

There stands a land so far away Where courage flows and evil frays Where the weak stand strong and the strong stand weak All together on the mountain peak The strong try and so they fail All alone oh so frail But what happens when the weak rise up To go on up and up Well they, So like a...

I was bored in class a couple days ago ^^; so this was the result. Waiting Sitting around Abiding by In this room All the time

Owning the street With a can do face Rocking a briefcase Round a concrete maze Hardcore In a bar Whiskey drink Going far

Ever been to paradise?! Or what was once a paradise? I am here at the moment Feeling a little bit content Embracing. Feeling. Ever felt the rain coming? Hearing the waves crashing. Wave after wave,

Stumbling slowly, in a forest of fireflies Avoiding gazes, from judgemental eyes Feeling the bark on an ancient oak tree Searching out hope, longing to be free I happen to cross, a fresh water lake The shock of the water, my spirit will wake The earth, my home, will open it's arms

Your eyes, are like fire, and they burn me. I look into them, deeply because I love you, can't you see? And that hurts me more than anything, it's true that loving you is worse than the worst weather

When did you become, a broken flower? Twisting round and turning cold? When did you decide, to change your mind? Why was your decision, so quick, and bold? Did you stop to think for a minute About the rest of the garden? The weeds had begged for a day off

I ask for criticism, I do not mind harsh words if it does not work well, all I ask is read, enjoy, and write (if you wish) your thoughts of what you read, and to write what could be fixed. Thank you, my friends. *bow* Untitled.. There is a time and a place, An emotion shown in grace, ...

I haven't written anything in a while so i'm rusty. Would like some honest feedback. I'm sinking in mire drowning in tears darkness consumes me feasts on my fears Hanging on to a thread

It's that time Prince is back In the mix Not standing back Focused and ready Defending attacks From those less willing

I haven't written a poem in so long! So I wrote one tonight ^^ sorry, couldn't think of a title though. Untitled Through eternity Frozen remained How exactly Am I to blame?

Man in the Chat Room An older man, the age of 42 He decides to dip his toe into the world of the internet. He buys a machine. It's not a brand new one but it will serve him well enough.

Here it is. It really captures the essence of the feelings of most high school janitors. My friend is a janitor and this is dedicated to him: Untiltled By Benjamin Fabian Blob The Toilet. Don't Soil it. Although it is short. It really captures emotion in the piece. PS. This is a real...

I realize these don't have anything to do with anime or anything else of that nature, but I thought I would share! Finally Light is non-existent Darkness surrounds all that I know And im as cold as the snow Watching and waiting Hoping and praying

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My eyes find it hard believing There's brown nosers giving you the red carpet treatment Indeed, it's all because of the green-eyed monster The gateway to greed which leads to what thoughts of demise conjure Your world is crashing down with gray hairs and that allow Rationale for you to hate...