Stumbling slowly, in a forest of fireflies
Avoiding gazes, from judgemental eyes
Feeling the bark on an ancient oak tree
Searching out hope, longing to be free
I happen to cross, a fresh water lake
The shock of the water, my spirit will wake
The earth, my home, will open it's arms
Your eyes, are like fire, and they burn me.
I look into them, deeply because I love you, can't you see?
And that hurts me more than anything, it's true
that loving you
is worse than the worst weather
When did you become, a broken flower?
Twisting round and turning cold?
When did you decide, to change your mind?
Why was your decision, so quick, and bold?
Did you stop to think for a minute
About the rest of the garden?
The weeds had begged for a day off
I ask for criticism, I do not mind harsh words if it does not work well, all I ask is read, enjoy, and write (if you wish) your thoughts of what you read, and to write what could be fixed. Thank you, my friends. *bow*
There is a time and a place,
An emotion shown in grace, ...
I haven't written anything in a while so i'm rusty. Would like some honest feedback.
I'm sinking in mire
drowning in tears
darkness consumes me
feasts on my fears
Hanging on to a thread
It's that time
Prince is back
In the mix
Not standing back
Focused and ready
From those less willing
I haven't written a poem in so long! So I wrote one tonight ^^ sorry, couldn't think of a title though.
Am I to blame?
Man in the Chat Room
An older man, the age of 42
He decides to dip his toe into
the world of the internet.
He buys a machine.
It's not a brand new one
but it will serve him well enough.
Here it is. It really captures the essence of the feelings of most high school janitors. My friend is a janitor and this is dedicated to him:
By Benjamin Fabian Blob
The Toilet. Don't Soil it.
Although it is short. It really captures emotion in the piece.
PS. This is a real...
I realize these don't have anything to do with anime or anything else of that nature, but I thought I would share!
Light is non-existent
Darkness surrounds all that I know
And im as cold as the snow
Watching and waiting
Hoping and praying
Hmm, just felt like writing something like this ^^ see if you can guess the instrument? I know, not much info to go on ^^; and...I'm sorry if it rhymes too much >__<
The Feelings of the Chords
Strings are stung
Feelings are sung
Mask the frown
My eyes find it hard believing
There's brown nosers giving you the red carpet treatment
Indeed, it's all because of the green-eyed monster
The gateway to greed which leads to what thoughts of demise conjure
Your world is crashing down with gray hairs and that allow
Rationale for you to hate...
Yay, a poem from me that doesn't rhyme....a rare occurrence O_O this was a fast one, I hope everyone likes it ^^
Through the darkness, we see light
Through the shine, we see shadow
In our hearts and in our minds
Engulfed in what we see
I've run out of things to do.
So here is a poem.
It has no rhyme scheme.
It is not consistent in any way.
To be honest, I'm not sure why I'm doing this.
Just a quick one. I was bored, so I decided to write something about this guy that I’m crushing on in school. :3
Here goes… :p
I have a crush
His name is Ash
He’s always late
And sleeps in his class
He’s so adorable
The title says so,
But do you know so?
It makes me snicker in excitement,
once again to fulfill this commitment.
I've found my place once again,
in this forum that made me so vain.
Ask me now, I answer 'so',
Ask me later, yes or no-
Lost or found, not my ride
I'd do anything to see you-
Open your eyes
Tell me your woes
I cherish them too
Because every second counts
When it comes to me and you,
Peanut Butter Jelly Time
Repetitive, and barely rhymes
The dancing is barely sub-par
I want to hit you with my car.
A dancing banana, yeah, that's rich
It looks like it's come from a ditch
Blocky pixels make it up
Oh how I wish it would shut up
I'm breaking inside
I just want to die
Don't know how to feel
Just know how to hide
My life is a mess
I can't pick it up
My love is gone
But the pain still remains
Like a rose dies
Swirling my spear
In furious rapidity
Facing the odds
With a fearless face
Act or react
It's a timeless race
I jumped off the cruise-boat..
Lost at sea..
Lost in the sea
I see a ship
Flags out, timber strong
But the ship is fast
Hello, my pretties. I believe I've been gone from this section far too long. Please, enjoy the mind of a disturbed individual.
This is not to insult or offend anyone. It's just a joke. A very sick joke. If you are easily offended, don't read it.
'Twas the night before Christmas and...
Hi everyone :)
This is just pieces from my collection of assorted Poetry. Hope you like. Reviews, comments, critiques are all welcome and I'll try to update and reply as soon as.
She wakes to the sound of crying children.
Iím sitting isolated in the emptiness
Unable to endure its torture
And I cry for Freedom
Even though it wonít come
Not now, not today, not tomorrow, not next week, not ever
I want out.
Itís been said many of times
No one hears my cries
Uhm, hi. I know I haven't really posted or anything but we have to do this thing for my health class that requires us to write a poem. On one side, the person is mentally ill in some way. On the other, they are normal. Just want to know a couple opinions. Thank you in advance. ><
Pour your heart out
Like the milk into your cereal bowl
Mend what remains
Of your shattered soul
The broken fragments form a trail
To find the ones who love you
Who hate to watch you fail
Soon the cereal gets soggy
And it doesn't taste good anymore
Memories we had become foggy
Kill me with your cold blood,
I dont wanna live any more
I wont hurt you with my anger flood
kill me lover, kill me hardcore
No one will blame you,
no one will kill you back,
no one will hate you,
you didnt miss your track
The cast pebble,
penetrates and permeates the calm exterior.
The ripples which spread,
so hypnotising, carry the burden of anguish.
That, which is seen,
Although truly felt, lasts only a fleeting moment.
Without a trace,
equilibrium returns to the exterior.
Serene once more,
that which was...
this started out as a poem for my dear sugoku subarashii hiroe chan, but i revised it a lil and made it into a song.
I dont know what I should do
When I'm alone, I pretend that I'm with you
Because everyday I think about the way
You make me smile...you know you make me smile
And I dont...
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