Criticize as you please, but enjoy
Darkened clouds that gloom my skies,
Temperance moments lost with the lies,
Echoes of tears from soldered eyes,
Watching it drip-soft raspy sighs..
But not all is down, not all is sad,...
Words are fierce
Whether written or said
If it came out of the mouth it is
never gonna go away
You might regret it but you know
you can't deny it
It's a powerful tool that often is blessed and cursed
because you can't control what others say but if you
Some of the poems that I'll be posting here are dedicated for different animes and some just some of the feelings I express..:) T-T It's okay to critic/comment.
Everyone has a dream, a dream that they want to achieve
but sometimes we get impaitent with it and wish it be granted
on a count of one, two, three!
They say be careful for what you wish for because it just might
come true, but hardly anyone has picked up that line, but mostly
Flowers are red when you enter the room
Flowers become blue when you leave the room
What other colors will they turn to?
Life has been as changing as the flowers
so don't expect life to be ever so easy
Flowers are yellow when the sunshine shines
Flowers are blue when the rain pours...
High atop the cathedrals I stand,
A lonely silhouette against the full moon,
Beneath me, there is only peace and stillness
as the city sleeps.
A hundred years have passed me by,
I've neither aged nor weakened,
I dazzle mortal eyes.
These are but wonders of immortality
The elements swirl, in a typhoon
Wind sounds, like a loon
Earth rumbles, on the moon
Fire burns, way to soon
Elements swirl, always in tune.
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I am the pet, I'll always Care
I am shown, with flowing Hair
So honored am I,
In my time of need,
That I bow with grace
And drop to one knee.
To thank the world
For allowing me time
To exist and learn,
It's already hard enough for you.
You don't need me to slow you down.
I'm a mess and all I'll ever do is,
tear you down to your weakest state.
So pretend I never existed anyway.
I boarded up my windows,
so I could never be tricked by the light of day,
because outside isn't real anyway....
Ok, so this is something I wrote some time back and I just want a little feedback on it. I know I'm amateur but you can give some advice! Thanks! :)
I look back even though I think I shouldn't,
I smile a while, then I keep on running,
Towards what, I don't know.
I can't exactly see where...
I have a tune for it too! Ahah.
I wrote this song because there was someone whom i used to be close with but due to some circumstances, she moved away and I haven't seen her since. She was a very important person to me and I would give anything to see her again...cheesy I know xD but those...
The surface of the sun is not too far
For me to reach up a hand,
And turn down the intensity
If it will please your eyes.
The water is not too deeply filling
For me to swim to the bottom
And take an unknown stone
If with you, it'd create surprise.
No more I'd wish to think,
Even less I would require-
A furnishing of sin
For this carnal desire
And even less I'd ponder
No more could I judge,
Significance be less
No more than a nudge
Um... Here goes nothing? :)
I want your eyes to see only me,
I want to have you for myself
because I don't like sharing,
When I have you in the palm of my hands
I'll strike like a tigress and make you mine.
You see, I don't like the way
you talk about 'her' when I'm around,
Something I've wanted to write for a while now, but couldn't for some reason :/ anyway, I finally wrote it today. Someone helped me with the title though ^^~
Was darkness bound
The shred of light
Theres this place
off the coast
along the beaches
and on the shores
and when the day is done
the sun sets down
it starts to glow
I wrote this a while back.. It's not very good but I hope you guys enjoy it at least. It was for a very special person who would have never known what it would have meant.
My Guardian Angel
You are my Guardian Angel,
The protector of my sky,
A star that twinkles; you’re that bright....
Of confident energy
Alert, ready waiting
You stand strong and proud
Like an age old sentry
Of courage and drive
With endless potential
Exploring the world
An adventure's essential
Bring on the sea
I'll swim for miles
The biggest cliff?
I'm here on my break
Eating some bread,
Thinking there's hours
Of work left ahead.
I'm tired of working
I'd rather dance instead,
But in life I'll never dance
Like I do inside my head.
Please critique as harsh or as easily as you choose, but please enjoy what you read if you can please.
Night sky that shines down tonight,
Bless all who seem to be in sight,
Wash these tears that sting like a bite,
Turn all the fear into something bright.
Lying in bed
I couldn’t sleep
The radio is on
Waiting for my favorite song…
There stands a land so far away
Where courage flows and evil frays
Where the weak stand strong and the strong stand weak
All together on the mountain peak
The strong try and so they fail
All alone oh so frail
But what happens when the weak rise up
To go on up and up
Well they, So like a...
I was bored in class a couple days ago ^^; so this was the result.
In this room
All the time
Owning the street
With a can do face
Rocking a briefcase
Round a concrete maze
In a bar
Ever been to paradise?!
Or what was once a paradise?
I am here at the moment
Feeling a little bit content
Ever felt the rain coming?
Hearing the waves crashing.
Wave after wave,
Stumbling slowly, in a forest of fireflies
Avoiding gazes, from judgemental eyes
Feeling the bark on an ancient oak tree
Searching out hope, longing to be free
I happen to cross, a fresh water lake
The shock of the water, my spirit will wake
The earth, my home, will open it's arms
Your eyes, are like fire, and they burn me.
I look into them, deeply because I love you, can't you see?
And that hurts me more than anything, it's true
that loving you
is worse than the worst weather
When did you become, a broken flower?
Twisting round and turning cold?
When did you decide, to change your mind?
Why was your decision, so quick, and bold?
Did you stop to think for a minute
About the rest of the garden?
The weeds had begged for a day off
I ask for criticism, I do not mind harsh words if it does not work well, all I ask is read, enjoy, and write (if you wish) your thoughts of what you read, and to write what could be fixed. Thank you, my friends. *bow*
There is a time and a place,
An emotion shown in grace, ...
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