Forum: Poetry

It's snowing outside every day Winter came with pride again Time to cheer,time to play For every woman,every man Cold it's outside,the lakes iced Inside it's warm and light Oh winter,you shall be praised On the sky the stars shine bright

I get it now why you refuse to smile, that deceitful grin, that blinding facade of contaminate and untamed nature. With eyes that drown out sorrow and push back the darkness. you hide your urge to blind the world from the truth openly I allow you to enter my subconcious, taking control of...

I wrote this just now and can't think of a suitable title. Maybe it's because of the word choice or the way i set up the poem. I don't know. Can you help me with the title please? Thank you. Any comment on the poem itself is most welcome. Thanks for reading. Life is a cruel crude symbol of...

Two earlier poems, I don't really like these as much but I decided to post them anyways.. Inferno Vacant canvases, Sight to pierce. Hushed tounges slip, speaking nothing. Grotesque forms abound. Pallid death, veils all beings. What is their purpose? Tragic wraiths, suffering of eons,...

this is not a very good one. :( Love You Till The End I love you like I love a day when everything goes right I love you like I love to lay and watch the stars at night I love you like I love the rain ...

Corruption Giled Ikons, mute oracles The aura of Saint, draped in marble Twin apetures gleam, azure, life, they portray Solace their nature, concealing infamous secrecy

Last Chance To Say It is over to tell you, To tell you how I felt, Because I spent my Last chance to say On trying to forget about you. Not another thought spent crying, Spent fighting, Spent wanting to die. I just want to finally tell you,

I see your dirty face try to hide the fear in your eyes. It's no use now, there's blood in the water and I want more. With one quick motion you're own your back, with arms around your neck The pain, unbearable, your victory, lost. Your vision starts to blur, and your body goes numb. You have...

Whiteness Whiteness all around Thing of pureness and of sound Creeping softly ‘round my room Pressed against this saintly tomb Whiteness Whiteness line the street Whiteness close and under feet On the gowns which all must wear In their souls who no secrets bear

well, as the title says: this might be one of the worst poems you've ever read. i had to write a poem for one of my classes, and once i was done i thought i'd post it here. i am a beginer (i can't spell, btw) so if it is completely horrible, just tell me "it sucks" and if it's good (and it probably...

Note: ||This might be a little... Over the top. But it just came from my fingers like all my poetry. Comments, thoughts, all appreciated even in such a mood. || Is faith really all we need, To stay forever alive? Can't we sow more then we reap, For our sins to be undone? Dust to dust- ...

Okay, I don't know if this one is very good, but I'd like to hear what you think! ^^ thanks as always. Saved This made up illusion, it's scaring me, killing me, wrong. There is a box that surrounds me,

Exchanging honest words. More important than existence, Surely the exchanging of honest words that bring us together, In the contact of eye’s we couple forever , To the brink of a hearts persistence. I wrote this two years ago , so I apologise that I can't remeber the plot of it.

I had to write a poetry analogy on multiple poems and one assignment was to write your own and this is the one I wrote. I did this in a sonnet format but a free style sonnet. It was a dream, just like the day before. A dream, where I was content with my life.

This is a poem that also turned into a song i wrote. sorry that most my poems are depressing. I wrote it thinking of Shinji Ikar form Evangelion Enjoy! Silence builds an awful wreckage of a boy

I wrote this poem last night. I guess I got inspired by Edgar Allen Poe's Annabel Lee. I was reading it yesterday, so I decided to make my own version. I found out that his Birthday is the same day as mine. It was weird. But anyway, here it is. (Thanks for the help Rein*. You're a real good friend)...

wake up im calling for u im falling hard for you yet i dont know why im a guy who loves as the sky clears and you can see the doves heaven awates us dont leave me broken i really want to give you a token of my love for you beleveing in me i thank you for always being there please dont...

Here's one of my Outsiders poems I had to type for school: Silent as a winter's night The boy flinches in fear As he awaits his harsh fate Yelling quietly so no one hears Gasping with tears Over memories and fears Loathing over his short life

A poem i wrote a few years ago. Its kind of lame :unsure: You Forgive me You forgive me for liking you too much, and i’ll forgive you for not liking me enough…

The rain falls and all is calm But my heart keeps beating for you. The thunder roars as the rain pours drowning out any pain trying to come through Is it my mind that wonders every time what it would be like if you were here Or is my heart the one who is hoping and wishing you were...

The weather today was really hectic. It rained last night, but the weather soon got really cold, thus turning the water to ice. It literaly took an hour to get all of the ice off the car, 'cause we couldn't see anything. So I just got inspired by the weather today, and I made this poem. Let's see...

Beating Heart I forget how a heart beats, I lost it long ago. I don't want one because If it was to beat again I wouldn't know what to do. I forget how a heart beats, Don't want to know either For if I see it beat

NAIL THERE'S A NAIL THAT PERMEATES MY EARS TO REACH THE BRAIN TAKE IT OUT OF ME NOW CAUSE THERE ARE WORDS I'LL NEVER SHARE TURNS GOSSIP TO IDEAS WITH A FACE DISGUISED OF TRUTH NOT TO SEE ANY MIRROR

. Blessed Be The Human Beast Now lost in chaos - perfect world Transcending truth - it signifies the deadly picture of reality Hey, you triumphant, King of Flesh! Don't bow your head and lick the dust Arise and blast distinction between soul and blood

I know this is a mouthful to swallow BUT i'm asking you to chew properly and then critique me on my chef capabilities. I'm just kidding. I want your honest comments on where i went wrong and how to fix it. If i went wrong and it needs fixing that is. Please and thank you for reading it. It was...

He walked away and never looked back All hope was lost I stood there in the pouring rain Waiting for him to run back to me But it never happend Every bone in my body shook, I could hardly stand My heart tore so I couldn't breathe It tore slowly so it would hurt me more My head hung down...

I wrote this one last night. This is basically what was going on in my house, and it was really annoying. It's not very good, so I would really appreciate comments on how to fix it. I just wrote this down because I really wanted to express my annoyance with the situation. SCREAMING!! ...

I didn't know if I should have it as three words instead of two because of the I'm. It is actually "I am" but I didn't think it worked well with the poem...Oh well? >< Those two words I dread the most For they mean nothing at all But I can't stop myself from saying them I'm sorry I...

Last Letter I'm writing to you My final goodbyes, My final farewells, To find out if you can survive without me. As I'm writing Tears are dropping. Every night I've cried, Wanting you to hide them away,

The shadow of yesterday lingers Curled between a young child's fingers Who saw it all come to pass As yesterday breathed it's last Forget the past, because it's gone But everyone knows thats not true Though it happened yesterday, The shadow still lingers on you