Well . . . I couldn't really think of a title, so I came up with a really lame one. Sorry, but I couldn't think of anything else. Anyone whe has a suggestion for a new one, it's greatly appreciated. Alright, back to the poem. This poem is one I couldn't fully get into. (probably why I couldn't name...
Unknown Tells Me
Darkness stare into it's eyes
It grabs you, rips you from limb to limb
Darkness where are you?
Traveling along gold encrusted roads
Pillars made of jewels
Fantasy grabs you and eats your flesh
(Because poems don't always have to rhyme. ;) )
I wrote this via Automatic Writing back in June '06. For those of you who don't know what automatic writing is: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Automatic_writing ) I entered an almost trance-like state and after I woke up, I sat back and read what I...
well, i havnt posted in a while, well here, i will post a random little snippet from a notebook of mine.
I cry out,
a small, strangled noise
I need you to see me
want you to know
Why dont you see
I am right here
A new poem by Tsuki! I actually have a lot more to post, but I think I'll spread them out a bit . . . so, this poem is about love, and I'm not the best in that area, I admit. I'm sorry if it's not the best, but here's my attempt. ^^ Thanks for reading and please reply. *Tsuki*...
Song of Splitting Heads
Slash, crack, bleed, bleed
Butcher knife in the head
Brain popping out, somehow a hole had been
Cut right through
No I didn't mean that I am no criminal
I didn't eat that man, I didn't eat that man
I look at myself in the mirror
All I see is a beast
I'm like a wicked gambler
Couldn't be saved by some priest
Gambled my heart to you
Thought I did hold a trump card
Even though it was gambling it felt like kung-fu
Before I knew it I ended up at the graveyard
okay, here's another poem I've written recently. I'm not really sure about this one, and I feel the end is weak, though I couldn't really think of anything else. Tell me what you think and suggestions. And as always, Thanks for reading, even more for replying. *Tsuki*...
Note: Something went wrong the poem is a bit in a mess know. But I think I fixed most... It get quite ruined =p
When I wanted to edit some stuff and copied it. It came like this. =O
Soldier Fist versus mind A hole in the wall I wish I left you behind My thoughts in a pitfall The...
Come to Bed
Come to bed my sweet
Come to bed your eyes drag
Dark lines, and shadows across your eyes
Like a raccoon dear
Come to bed my sugar
Come to bed your paranoia as your nightmares
Ok I think I did suceed in this one
You make me complete.
My claws grasping for you
Is love just a mental disease
Why won't you try something new
Just for a moment let your mind freeze
Note this might be a bit bad but it's to get back in all the stuff =)
On my journey
I stood there bravely
Till I found you
You keep me full off doubt
You keep me wondering
The more I look around the more I scout
The more I find false hope is all I'm plundering
Looking with a magnifying glass
I'm a soldier
Fighting and trying to surpass
i started workin on a poem yesterday and decided to take it to the next level and put it to music. so i produced some music to go with it and sang it and heres what i got so far. now keep in mind i havent had time to mix it down proper but im definately feelin it. please give it a listen and feel...
feelings always cause me to fall
i liked it better when i felt nothing at all
who i was is becoming faded
in fear of becoming what ive always hated
i dont understand why i feel this way
telling you to go when i want you to stay
lost in a world of constant twilight
endlessly waiting for you...
I wrote this a VERY long time ago, so it's not exactly up to standard. This is another of my contest winning poetry entries. At the time, I'd just been cheated on by my boyfriend at the time, so I was a little raw emotionally. (In other words, excuse the emo tones. xD )
I had been meaning to write this for a long time before I finally got off my buttress and wrote it a while back. I actually intended to write it as if I were telling a story, but I then decided to go with a more poetic theme. :P
This was actually based entirely on dreams I had as a child, where...
Umm, well, because I've been watching 30 Days of Night so much lately, I thought I'd make a poem. So, tell me what you think, and what I could do better. ^_^ Thanks *Tsuki*
That terrible night,
they took you away.
to keep it safe i locked it away
nothing could penetrate the walls of my heart...
but the sorrow dripped in and filled it up
the lock was faulty from the start...
nothing to lose
nothing to steal
nothing in, nothing out
so afraid to feel...
The King of Worms
The King of Worms they call him
He's hiding down there in his dark, moist soil
he calls home and when he comes out he finds
himself trapped in places he shouldn't be
First it's the cement and the sun bakes him
Then it's a child hand as they feel his slimy body
In the Forgotten Keep
Somewhere deep inside chambers
moist with gray walls, there is the Forgotten Keep
Where the future is woven and foretold
by those who have only seen the universe
The Forgotten Keep is where
those who have been spirited away go
You can see their bodies and their bones
The Clock Can't Stop
Tick tock, just watch the pendulum swing
It's counting down the minutes
And there is nothing you can do to stop it
You try to turn the clock off
You throw away the coo coo clock
But you cannot stop time tick,tock
Bump, thump, your heart pounds in your chest
Always looking forward
Wanderlust and adventure
always in my tracks
Not a one
Just a a few
dark, the cause of death,
it makes you shiver,
makes you fear it,
we need the darkness,
because too much light,
can destroy us,
so that's why we need darkness,
even though we hate it soemtimes,
we are just gonna have to live with it,
so don't worry,
-It seemed like evry poem on here was about death or love. I felt like it needed change.-
Every one seems to be sad or happy
To giggle with glee or cry themselves to sleep
But what about anger?, pride?, shame?
The feelings of guilt, honor, or rage
I dont laugh or cry
Thanks for littlemisssunshine for helping with ideas and gramar.
This is the rebuild version
"There were 3 friends that always walked in the park. The trees were green, the birds always sang. The wind happily blew as the sun shone with its majesty.
- How are you? I'm fine thanks - said the...
The phone rings, tears descending from eyes so hurt
I feel there is nothing left
Give up, let go, never returning
So close to ending the present life
Then you appear, your voice on the other end
So comforting, all I need is you
To hear your voice, my survival
My superman from terror
"never again" i promised myself...
and put my heart up on the shelf...
i never wanted to feel that way again
i thought i was fine...
always using the line...
"i think we'd be better off as friends"
but the lies that i told...
to myself made me old...
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