Uhm, Yeah; so this is something I made tonight when I was feeling very emotional. I don't know if its good, or bad; so feedback would be cool. Its about a girl who broke up with her boyfriend (Destiny vs. Boyfriend) and The boyfriend loved her. Its pretty much a goushy thing about love, and how...
Into The Darkness
I stand alone
Watching the pathetic humans around me
So annoying and emotional
What a waste of existence
Emotion is for the weak
I walk into the darkness
And abandon my humanity
Darkness is what I want
Evil and nothingness surrounds me
Mm...long title I know lol. This is a poem I wrote this morning in school. I hope everyone likes it. ^^
The Pain of Your Words on Top of Everything Else
Pain inflicted by these wounds
Eternal stabbing through and through
Everything around me swoons
As this pain becomes morbid dues
This is a poem I thought of tonight. It only took me a few minutes. I hope you like it. ^^
Wasted time and wasted effort
It all forms a line
Connects to the same thing
It brings you a sign
of your demise
Dedicated to the love of my life,Jacob.
I couldn't come up with those birthday poems...haha.
Well anyway,hope he likes it.^^
And thanks for reading.
Come Fly With Me
Will not catch you.
To Protect is to keep that specail someone...
To protect is to keep you and your friends safe...
To protect is to defend your opinions...
To protect is to care for your friends...
To protect is to see your loved ones happiness...
To protect is to keep your ground on fear...
To protect is...
this was just on my mind
Flagrant Assasins Vaporize the Masses/
Bodies and Caskets Burn like Lava and Acid/
Masive Blasters of Plasma Reduce Souls to Ashes/
Gun Slingers and Slashers compete for the Earth's Destruction/
Corruption Confusses the Weak and the Helpless/
the Selfless fight...
Dwellers and Tenants suffer from the Chemist who's Mind's gone Menaced/
Remnents of Bodies and Souls without Pennits, Sentenced to Eternity in Firey Tenaments/
Screeches and Far Cries,Demons with Dark Eyes,in your Mind Going Threw Archives/
Keep your Thoughts Deep in the Dark and Away from the...
"Why? Why do love him? He treats you like nothing... except dirt...
I was your friend for many years.... He just now came to your life....
You become jealous when you see me talking to another girl and didn't talk to me for a week... You see him flirting with your older sister and you forgave...
Hmm..well I thought I'd try something new. So here it is. Not the very best of poems, I'm warning now. I hope everyone likes it. ^^
What Happens in the Dark
Walking in this darkened night, no moon anywhere in sight
Street lamps once dimmed are now in shadow, there is no afterglow
I just recently read a certain thread that some didn't seem to like much. I am not posting this to offend, merely posting this to show what a certain someone's poem could have been. If they had only tried a bit harder to think about it. This even gives a bit of advice.
Warning: A dictionary...
More from the "Dreams of an Insomniac" Series. :p
Blood Red Sun
I Hate to see the blood red sun go down.
Know there'll be trouble if I go to town.
Can't help myself, I'm just pulled that way.
Perhaps, ask forgiveness another day.
I walk in the shadows, don't want to be seen.
Full of tripe
Why does it always
Gotta be like that?
Write satire, or even joy
It never hurts to be coy
Careful not to
~While we're all being emo - I might as well make use of it.
Tears of Blood
You promised me, not so long ago
Every word that comes out of your mouth
turns into stone
heavy and immeasurable
Another pretty depressing one...
Trying so hard
Only to be overcome by despair
A poem I wrote when I was imagining something calming to calm myself. Not as descriptive as I wanted it to be though..I hope everyone likes it. ^^
All these colors
Red, orange, and yellow
They reach so far high
And make you feel so mellow
One of those sad, suicide ending poems...
Dying for Love
A teardrop hits the tiled floor
All moments seem to cease
This boy will never truly be happy
Until he finds his peace
His peace lies within a girl
Well, I've taken longer then expected, sadly, but I bring yet another poem with me. I actually think that this one is pretty good, even though I've never really been a rhymer. Hopefully you think the same, and you enjoy!
Thanks for reading, *Tsuki*
A poem that just came to me. I hope everyone likes it.
Trapped in this nothingness that surrounds me
Stuck in this emptiness that compels me
Move forward but there's nothing to turn to
Go back to find the path erased
We Are all so different, as people
one so different from the other
Maybe for better, or for the worse.
My tears fall, masked by the shadows of indifference
What will it take, then, for me to prove that I am not
I am who i am though sometimes i'm not
Who am i really? I've somehow forgot
So many things that i feel i could be
Such irony though that i cannot be me
I want to have fame, i want to be cool
But without talent i'll just be a fool
I want to be rich, i want a big house
But without a lover i...
Old men hanging onto old ways,
young men dying for it's preservation.
The times never change,
no matter how many plays.
Now this world ends,
not of old age but decrepedation.
Look up to the skies for the angels cry.
Come has the time.
Mass graves scatter the range.
Who is Kira then, to judge
the rights and wrongs of this world
Light and Darkness
Goodness and sins.
He who speaks
from behind a painted veil
hiding his face
I am the one
who punishes the evil in this world
I purify sinners
without a thought
For they do not deserve to exist on this Earth.
I will decide their fate for them.
I am the master behind the scenes
1. AN EMPTY SOUL
When it's you and me
I am whole
When you're gone
I'm but an empty soul
Just wondering around aimlessly
Waiting for you to come back to me
Now your here,you've filled the hole
I'm no longer an empty soul
Winter wind mix with the drag of a cigarette
Spiral off spinning soft wispy pirouettes
Past scapeshifting trees and spiring minarets
The last dying leaf waves sad like a bannerette
The fingering oaks are reaching and clawing
Up to the sky which is slate gray and yawning
Okay, so I've been very interested in Poetry lately and I thought I should give it a shot. This is my first "published" work, and tell me what you think? I worked really hard, so any tips, or advice will be very nice. Thanks, :D VV
As you walk, the sun gets brighter
Running fast, you feel so...
Mm well this poem is a mean one. I wrote it this morning in school because if I didn't, I might have yelled at my "Friend" >_> she was talking about me behind my back to my other friend...so I wrote this in order not to cause any controversy because I don't like to fight...she's made me bare my...
Her eyes radiate heaven
with a hint of hell,
putting you under their spell.
Her gaze blinds
Her gaze pierces.
There's no looking back.)
This here is my little thread where I'll put some poems of mine in. I hope you don't mind and feedbacks are alwasy welcome! No worries! Just tell me what's on your mind. Cause I'm not a little girl who would cry over bad critics ^.^
And I want to improve myself so some feedback would be really...
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