22 Dec 2008
You don’t know me,
How can you say such things?
That make me hurt so damn much,
I have to struggle.
I have to get to the top,
Helped into a gutter,
Just to get back up.
Strutting the street
Make me angry
I'll just be cool
Catch the headline
Words 'you' and 'fool'
this came to walking from the library (it's kinda confusing right it came on its own...)
My thoughts they are binding,winding,twisting....
One says suicide...
One says death to those who hurt me...
One says kindness and forgiveness...
The other says death and punishment to all...
the sun, the sun
i see its Crystaled glare
i feel the heat of its jealousy
while it watches me toes
touch and entangle
in what it most fervently Desires
to be wrapped up in mother Earth's
warm and green embrace
Well, well, well . . . it's been quite a while, hasn't it?
Unfortunately, I haven't written anything over the past few months but I did write this poem about 10 minutes ago. Hopefully I haven't lost my touch. x3 And even if brung is not a word, I still like it! D:<
Thank you for reading, and I...
Long absence I've had from the poetry section huh? Well, this is probably the last poem I will ever write. I don't have the heart for it anymore.
This one isn't even very good.
The word holds no meaning
I'm playing a poetry game with a friend. We each take turns writing a poem on what we're thinking/what's going on/or generally anything. So here is the first one I came up with. I hope everyone likes it. ^^
Here I sit
Staring at the screen
It's late at night
But what does tired...
Wrote this last night....for Hellraiser01.
I feel your hands grow cold,
As you take them away.
I feel the chilling agony in my bones.
You take your hands away....
Is it fair,I do not mind.
You look down and not let me caress your lips;
Come on then
Give it your best!
'Cause I'll not give in
And I'll beat the rest
Strive and decide
Never turn back
Along the road is where I'll be
Hopefully nothing is taken from me
Through the night and up to dawn
Just makes me completely drawn
Today isn't the same as yesterday
Just the title says. But a different kind of lost.
Left or right
Which to choose?
Both in sight
But both could lose
To the right I look
The world is full of trails...
Trails me and you have to go through..
If you could live life with no hardships...
If i could be happy...
You and me are quite the site to see...
If people respected me...
If people hated you...
We have emotions like glue...
They bring us together even when...
Smiles seeped from your ear to mine.
Our simple, sweet lullaby.
I gazed upon aquamarine oceans
Brightly reflecting radiance.
A perfect vision of beauty.
Tightly ten met ten,
Warmth like summer.
But summer has its end.
Its like the forum was hit with an atomic bomb. What's going on? This section was never this dead.. o_O. Did all our poetry users give up? Do I need to post poems to cheer this section up?
Blustery wind travels through an abandoned mountain pass
Snow glazed tree branches move in subtle, mirrored images of each other
Dark footsteps show their depth when the light rises
As the turbulent sun swaps places with his brother
Star gazed skies give way to cloudy embraces of water heavy...
These are all limericks I wrote when younger with all original errors preserved. Most are terrible and scarily enough at one point I could actually more or less talk in limerick supposing the right condition was met. :wacko:
Feel free to comment, but note these aren't indicative of my...
I haven't gotten any "good" recomendations for the poetry corner in awhile. No, I've gotten some. But they were poems that the person pming me wrote, and I don't advocate promoting your own poems. (Hence why the only one I did of myself were crappy lol ones.)
Reccomend some to me in PM, but...
I sail alone through the desert skies
the unforgiving sands of time passed by
With only myself as the captain
just me myself and i
I happened to chance upon a few ships
of different build and style
there were friendships and reiationships
and maybe even courtships
Here is my Second poem on AF.
_-Breath into me-_
The beach moulds around my feet
Tiny pebbles moving and forming great shapes
Sea water drifts in and adds weight to the interlocked rocks
Makes the shape stay and create a path
Follow the trail of life
The bird in her motion of flight glances down from above
Souring in arcs and bends...
Its a Acrostic poem. Hope you like it.
Lingering in my heart for so long
Obviously drained by the emotion
Viciously creeping into my mind
Every thought of you counts.
This isn't a poem, and I'll allow this thread to be locked after like three - four logical and helpful replies. What I need is three examples posted of poems created by users on here. Just reply with a poem you made and that will be very helpful. Once three has been made, by all means lock this...
The great green grass covers the land
Without any interference
It grows when uninhibited, fast and vast
And provides for all
The great blue sky watches over us
Mighty and never-ending
It's a bright hot day!
The sun is high
Don't let the moment
Pass you by
Stick on your shoes
Go for a walk
Give up the internet
For a face to face talk
On desolate streets
Gust of wind
Cool your feet
I haven't written a poem in a long time ;__; so here is one that was on my mind today o.o I hope it's ok.
The fool is high
The fool is low
The fool is sly
The fool is slow
I'm caught in this world,
where the love of those dear
Are close at heart,
but when I'm broken
I can still hope and still feel love
Somehow I'm caught in this world
Of those I loved in the past
Of those who cared
He stand's almost 6'0ft tall
Wears a hat most times
Wander's around in the rain
Speaks only in rhyme
He'll look to the sky
With hope and admiration
Watching the free birds
Dark and misty waters
Crashing against the shore
Cold sandy beaches
Surrounded by fields of green
Wine stained scarves
Strung over tree branches
Empty shoes, missing feet
A thread for poetry,
of classic eastern form
haiku only please.
A lens sees
reflections of life.
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