the ride was pleasant... the wait was not... made me think twice of going or not going to take vacation invitation...
I step on the bus…
It’s full of people…
I had no choice
And stand on the aisle..
The bus went on..
I glanced outside the window…
The trees and fields are green
iam sorry for the inconvenience i caused...
it won't happen again..
it was October 24 and i am starting the vacation i have always dreamt of doing alone...
I woke up late
What a shame
The alarm went off at five
A signal for me to arise
But I didnít
i promised to post my poems here.. so here goes...
there are a bunch of them...
it's from my vacation portfolio actually...
i'll just post themone by one... haha...
i'd appreciate a very dissective comment....
1. Start of a Journey ~...
I know, I know.
Much too soon to post another poem... but this one comes from the heart. Lately I've been thinking aout my life a lot, my disease, my parents death... It's been keeping me busy lately. I have a pretty rough life, even if I say so myself. This is the result of me throwing my...
I made this in school... Thinking about someone...
The only one I want is you.
I've always looked around for your name.
On the sports list, for instance.
Are you on my team? Soccer? Turning? Swimming?
I hope so.
The clouds roll in a despair
it gets dark
I hear thunder say why
as it shakes the ground
The lightining strikes with fear
as it shines its light for guide and to strike
Now I must find my home
but I have another hand to guide me from the storm
and help me seek shelter
My roses bloom with emotion
but they sing a song of sorrow
for they sing of dark skies with little light
to free themselves from despair
The sun peeks through the dark clouds
to bring them freedom
and now they sing a song of happiness
because they are free to sway in the wind
The Face Of Beauty
By: Kanna Kuchiki
His breath was as cool as night
Close to my ear which I could feel
I could see him with the moonlight
The sight of his face was unconditional
But there was something there
In that part he had potental
Blue is the color of my tears
as they fall from my face
my worries become water
when they hit the floor
When I look at the puddle of tears
I see the worries I have got rid of
but they won't disappear as their still there
The blue tears are shined upon a light
Break me down
Colour me green
On a silver screen
Wipe it down
Win the game
So I took the song everyone knows and loves (okay maybe not love but you get the point). I don't know if this is considered plagiarism, but yeah I added a creepy spin to "My Darling Clementine". If I need to change anything please tell me, otherwise enjoy. Thanks for the comments in advance. ...
*Note* Lately I've been thinking a lot about how the world will end. I believe it'll end because of our greed. Humans start wars to take over other land, take oil, take whatever...and of course the wars finish with the protection to our people. Let's say a war breaks out in your country tomorrow...
I Miss Her,
I Love Her,
But Will It Occur,
I Wish It'll Concur.
Oh The Smile,
Oh I'd Die,
To See Her Smile,
Tis' Not A Lie.
names of creatures in the night
beware their night to scare
IS ALMOST HERE
wonder out if you dare
it's a night of fear
watchout they may get you
one word and your scared
their out and about for a fright
This One..I Wrote It When I Was Down In The Dumps.:wacko:
When He Burns,
Pain Is What He Churns,
Life's Unfair And Painful,
Fit For One As Sinful.
How Can Life Be Enjoyed,
When Destruction Embraces,
Here's Something I Came Up With A Few Months Ago,For My Dearest Angel.
Here I Stand,
True And Grand,
Grasp Your Hand,
Together We Land.
As Life Shuns,
We Are Blown Down,
Reforming the aspect
In a poetry section
Is there more than this transparent explanation? Perhaps a rigid, new line infiltration?
Or just the respect of sending invitations.. To an original direction of experimentation..
Focus on new
Yeah,Here's Another I Wrote Some Time Ago,Again,For My Angel.:D
A Feeling Came Out Of The Blue,
It Forces My Heart To Stir,
Finally My Mind Gains A Clue,
And This Feeling Is No Longer Blur.
My Feelings For You Is Undying,
My art, my muse.
Human form Picasso painting
Vincent Van Gogh's vibrant star
in starry night.
That's what you are
Only so much more
The star seed outline
In an apple's core.
I feel my soul
Trying to escape
Through my skin
My flesh is a jail cell
Letting no one in
Unless you have that set of keys.
And even then you'll have so many
choices and not enough time to
I wrote this one just for fun. Its pretty short, but I like it. Hope you guys enjoy.
PS- Yes I added smileys
A Dream That Will Never End
Please accept my starfish,
I carved it all night long.
It contains my...
Though hope does not always stay,
Though light does not always shine,
That dream will always remain,
Your love in my hands, sweet and divine.
Though flesh remains mental,
As night remains dead,
The remnants of hope, delicate in tact,
Don't ever shed.
There are many times when things turn...
Inspired by Iron Man.
he's an unwilling living soul who has
befriended Fear. Fear travels with the wind
whispering nonsense in his ear. She's making him
Fear the possibilities when he should be
transforming the impossibilities
into something probable. he could be willing,
he could be alive, itís...
This poem is dedicated to my only Sunshine<3 ^^
You took that light and stunned my eyes
That light even pierced through my dark
depths created by the demons in my closet
Oh, those demons
All the troubled that
As a prior note, this was a spur of the moment- inspired work in which I turned into a sound/word rhyming experiment. Whether or not the poem makes sense will be up to the interpretations of the reader. Please try saying it aloud to yourself and tell me what your reactions are, as well as just...
i wrote this for my dear friend hiroe chan....
when the sun begins setting inside my heart
youre there to add light amidst the dark
when the tides of sorrow fill my eyes
you are the island in the ocean of my life
when i feel i just want to fly away
youre the reason i choose to stay
In my merry-go-round
Lightning speed fast it goes
Where it stops
not even I
I close my eyes
But the feeling's still there
I feel the helplessness hiding
In the corners of my heart
Bury me with my marionettes, with my masks,
So I can be real, Only then will I be real.
Throw me into inferno, Into a bottomless pit,
So I can feel, Only then will I be able to feel.
Rip my roots out of the ground, Rip my heart out of its callous cage,
So I can understand, Only...
Not my best poem, I know. lol
I don't know
What I wish I knew
About what you know
I won't know
Won't ever know
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