Okay, sometimes it's hard to rhyme certain words. So I think this would be a good thread to have. If you have trouble rhyming something... check this thread! I'll update it as often as I can with random words that rhyme with other words. If you have a rhyme I don't have, and haven't posted, feel...
Firstly, thank you Xero for helping me come up with the youtube name.
This is the topic where I'm going to post videos. The other topic is where you can discuss things.
This is the first video, Introductionary!
I am revamping the rules as originally written by Princess Ai. I am adding to and subtracting from them now and will continue to do so as I see a need for it. Be sure to check back to the thread title often to see if you have read the most current rules.
There is a pinned topic in this forum....
What’s Going On?
This is to be your one stop thread to what’s currently going on in the forum. Links to writing challenges, contests, and featured stories, both past and present, will all be located here. Other fun activities may find their way into being linked here as well, so make sure you...
I did one for the fictions and now I'm doing one here for the benefit of everyone writing or reviewing poetry. Please note that I have taken this from here and have edited very little as I am no poetry expert and thought that it would be best to leave poetry writing tips to the experts.
I have started going through the threads and editing poems which are not in the default colours as per stated in the rules. If you KNOW you have posted a poem in colours, please edit it yourself. Any threads created from 13 Dec 2010 with poems in colour will attract a warning.
Theme: Sunrise and/or Sunset
Your poem can be written in any style. There is no minimum/maximum line count or word count.
How you interpret and use the theme is up to you.
Submissions must have a title (this will be used for the voting thread), but descriptions are optional.
I am halfway to cloud 9,
Halway to heaven,
Halfway to the place,
Were you are waiting for me.
Hlafway to a place so calm,
Are you there?
OK this is only my 2nd poem and i think it is a bit cheesy but hey what can ya do?
Day by day he would shadow every passer by,
Hoping to find someone in pain,
He would follow then for days,
Waiting for the moment to come,
Waiting for the pain.
A swift blow,
The fight is over,
With such an elegant flow,
Do the doves just pass over?
As time passes by,
The guilt overcomes him,
If he could just die,
Would the family forgive him?
Looking around for every path getting myself even more lost in my life
I had been down every path they all get even more worse than the last
I try to go down the right path but they all lead to a dead end
I try to get some help but it always winds up leaving me in the dust
Now I am lost in...
Well, not sure I never posted this around here... But probably not, since it's like the 2nd time I post on this forum... I wrote quite some time ago, but I reallly like it. Others said it's pretty good too, so... I hope you guys (and girls) like it. :)
The tears he cries are...
Darkness explodes from the edges steep,
Don't Look down it's time to leap,
Spinning twirling down you go,
Deep into the rabbit hole,
Pupils explode in the world of black,
Once inside there's no going back,
Hold onto the nothingness of empty space,
You say you love me (unknown data)
You tell me you need me (error)
And that you only have eyes for me (malfunction)
:: system error ::
:: automatic reboot ::
:: reinstalling data ::
You make me feel special (program error)
You give me everything I need (unknown data)
If you only knew why i cry ever night
that in my life i cannot hold the light
no one know the pain inside
the pain that everday i so...
time heals all time brings joy
time brought you, a handsome boy
i fell in love, i fell for him
my days were bright but futrue was dim
my feelings grew strong then pain hit all
i lost his trust and began to fall
time brought pain tim brought sorrow
id go to sleep dreading tomorrow
this empty heart walks alone
like a wandering nomad without a home
but tomorrow holds a sunny day
even if it kills me to be this way
my tears fall too dry
somtimes i wish id die
im holding on to this dream
the day will come my heart will sing
for now i sit in pure darkness
my day will...
the pain i must endure is as real as ever
its like a blister an open sore that doesnt get better
you are the salt that makes it burn
even now you make my stomach turn
not out of discuss or fear
but becacuse of love and wanting you near
my heart is unrepariable tattered and torn
everything is going wrong, nothing seems to work out right. i can see myself falling father from the light.
things seem to get better, then i get bit in the ***. i need somthing to happen, and it needs to happen fast.
i feel like im drowning and no one is helping. i cant stop my self from...
i only know him through writting on a screen.
and yet i feel he is but a dream.
i stop to think, "is he for real?"
im not prepaired for these feelings i feel.
am i opening myself to a world of agony and lies?
or is there true tenderness in his eyes?
or maybe im afraid to trust again.
The rose is wilted, discolord..and grey. I took notice as i walked by today.
I was reminded of "The Rose Bud" that you wrote for me. After all this time its still in my memory.
I know it by heart, from beginning to end. I remember every word in that poem you send.
All the other...
i feel anger and hate..for the accused, but i
stand proud. you make me want to shake
you and scream out loud.
life is too short for negitve thoughts or feelings.
ive learned all to well of these things.
the things ive lost that i hold so dear. but,
everything happens for a reason..its...
Im in love with someone new! I
cant believe it but its true!
Hes the perfect man in every
way. He brought sun shine to
my darkened day.
Hes the one Ive been serching
for. Hes come and helped me pick
my shattered heart off the floor.
Is it just me or does this happen alot? If feels like just yesterday we fought. Its never anything really big or deathly seriouse. Its somthing practically daily, but not out of the ordinary, and it makes me curiouse.
Is this the way its going to be? Is there somthing missing, somthing I cant...
Its too late now
and youre the one
dying. Now you
know what its like
to be the only one crying.
You made me
feel like I was to
blame. Now you
suffer, you lost at
she shivers in the night with memories
of his warmth. his breath on her
cheek, as he whispers in her ear, the sweet
nothings of love, she longs to hear.
surrouned in sorrow she cries no
tears. theyve all dried out from these nights
of loneliness. though she waits
for sunny days, of a...
I am posting a few here let me know what you think! Please read them all let me know if you want me to post more ^^
Why was I keeping all of this inside
a moment like this, only strong is my will
Why am I seeking all that you hide
My love for you, its only what you kill...
*Note: Not so sure I've posted this one.So bare with me.:D *
I promised you someday,
We'd be together everyday.
But as I wait right by the phone,
It seems though I'm so alone.
In this very silent room,
I'm thinking of the lies,
That will never ever die.
My life is not my own.
I live to protect others,
Never caring about myself.
There was a time when I could make
my own choices,
im sorry i wasn't happy enough for you
im sorry that i let you slip from my fingers
your doubt in our union never halted me
but your trust in another did
she could cheer you up when i could not
she could touch you when i could not
she could love you physically and mentally when i could...
my heart's gone missing
i've been through hell
this scar on my stomach was caused by you
man im so lucky to have you
my eyes are missing
my lips tainted
my ears death to the ones who care
im so lucky to have you
arms and legs are paralyzed
I cannot touch you now
Well as if i ever could
Your eyes look me through and through
Well they always would
I stand next to you as my mind wanders
I take the death stick from your mouth to save you
And replace it with my lips
But I must stop when your hands place on my shoulders
Im sitting next to you
Im basically touching you
However, you seem distant from me
You seem so far away
I talk about my day
As happy as you may seem
Your not really listening to me
You take my hand to rub it gently
When I cry and make a fuss
Want to know why the tears never cease?
I can smell the lust around you
I can see the want in your eyes
I can feel the heat
I can taste the uncertain desire
I can read your mind
You want something
And you want it bad
You only want me
To pull you on top
To whisper in your ear
Uhm, hi. I know I haven't really posted or anything but we have to do this thing for my health class that requires us to write a poem. On one side, the person is mentally ill in some way. On the other, they are normal. Just want to know a couple opinions. Thank you in advance. ><
:D I'M BACK AND READY TO SHARE!
You write your words down on paper
Your thoughts and emotions
As do I write in mine
But I have always wondered
When you write a poem do you become immortal
Like a piece of you is frozen in time
Because even after your gone the poems still there
I Can't Wait To See You
My heart pounds
My stomach flutters
My hands shake
I can't wait to see you
A smile grows on my face
A bounce enters my step
I can't wait to see you
Everytime just before it happens
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