Trc-rain Goes Over Thoughts-

[akachan]

Whoah! In this period I’m making a lto of trc walls(even if on 25 I have another exam X( .. ) for the pleasure of candy-chan and asher (hope) : D …
Anyway my english isn’t the best in the world…so I’m not sure if I’ve to write there “remember me”, ”remember of me” or “don’t forgive me”(the last one isn’t very good, but I put it so u can understand what I mean ^_^ ‘ ‘= a has to remember b )
Back to the wall..How is it?the original one didn’t have the arm and the shoulder on the left, so I’ve done them.. hope I’ve done them quite good TT.

[Candy-chan]

wheeeeeeeeeee tsubasa again! -^_^-
maybe "don't forget me"?
anyway, the general idea is good
the arm and shoulder is very very well done
but one thing: i dont like the yellow. maybe make it more brownish? add some of shaolans hair color in it. (But dont make it completely brown!)

[escaflownemoon]

his hair at the top is not very clean smooth extraction. Other than that I like it. :)

[Candy-chan]

now that i look at it yeah extration problems on top of his hair...oh and i dont really like the font, i think its too sqarry for the rainy wall

[Candy-StarR]

Yay... trc!! i like it - but syaoran's hair needs an outline? or just fixed up...
and there's also a tiny white line around his arm... i don't know if it's meant to be there - just letting you know

[akachan]

the white line is the rain that goes over him..is on all the rest of the ima.. I'll see for the other things ^_^thanks guys!!

[akachan]

I’ve fixed syaoran (or shaoran), not only the hair but also his clothes (thanks to the eyes of all of you ^^ ’ ) , and I’ve put a light orange hue to him…I think he’s cooler so ^_^..what do u think?
B-version: orange fading

[akachan]

C-version: orange fading with vertical lines….
which one is better?(personally I think this, but I’m making too walls with the grain effect ‘cuz I like it very much, so I’m not equal in the judgement :D )
[ I was wondering about adding black fading lines (always with the grain effect)to both the top and the bottom part of the wall)(not left and right)… °_°]

[Candy-chan]

i think last one is best
veeeeeery good ^^
dont touch it

[GangstaSnail]

hm, agree, the last one!