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Xebec
03-23-2004, 02:19 AM
Been trying to finish this one for a while....first time ive used an image scanned with my own fair hand :P

Ranef and Eclipse from the wonderful manga "Demon Diary"...love the artwork in it :)

At request ofmy sister Pipestrell...

asher_aj_wei
03-23-2004, 07:03 AM
I don't know about that text but I do know that the rainbow in the back is rather unnecessary. Unless it's from the show itself but it's not working with a background like this. Try like, dried leaves or something =|

escaflownemoon
03-23-2004, 08:26 AM
at first I didn't even see the rainbow until I read what asher said. Yea, I would also get rid of the rainbow and add leaves or dried up dead tree branches..seems like a dark mysterious show..and the text could be a little clearer. Other than that I like the scan. Good Job! :)

Pipestrell
03-23-2004, 08:52 AM
It's not that dark a story in that it's slightly shonen-ai. With that in mind the rainbow is somewhat appropriate.

asher_aj_wei
03-23-2004, 01:42 PM
Brown leaves can be pretty "romantic" too ^.^ In an appropriate setting that is (with the golden sun and a nice wind~)

MistressPookyChan
03-23-2004, 01:54 PM
it's very pretty; i love the colors and the background a lot. The only issue is that the image looks pixilated, which is a common error when scanning images.

Xebec
03-23-2004, 07:29 PM
lol....what you doing here pip?...hehe good to see you here *cowers in fear of future slagging his walls will get now*...shes an art/english/archiology student btw :P

anyways...ahh the rainbow...to be honest it was just a bit of a throwaway i put in to give the back ground a bit of depth...and i thought the colors in it set it off nicely :) ill try putting something else in its place...tree branches sounds good..could make that fit with teh "old oil-painting" feel i was going for...

as for the scanned image..sheesh this was teh worst one if ever worked with (in some ways)...at first i thought it was just moire from the scanning process untill i realised it wasnt...the original pic was ratehr small...say 2inchesx3inches...at 300dpi it turns out thats the pattern from the pigment on the paper...well to cut a long story short...no matter what tricks i did i couldnt smooth it without loosing detail...sooo...i smoothed it and blured it and layered it underitself with soft-light - was the best i could come up with...any otehr ideas? - ill smooth it anyways a when i redo therainbow bit (if pip lets me - she seems attaced to it hehe) and you can tell me what you think :)

WinterC_16
03-23-2004, 07:39 PM
maybe make it a 1024x768 instead of a larger size, that way u wnt have to stretch the image more than is nessecary, :^_^:

Xebec
03-23-2004, 10:50 PM
out with the rainbow...in with a tree

Candy-chan
03-23-2004, 10:55 PM
aaaa much better!
veryprretty wall, i love the texture ^^

asher_aj_wei
03-24-2004, 01:02 AM
Now it looks like a wallpaper you can use for the undead -_-
Ha, sorry. It just looks that way to me.

MistressPookyChan
03-24-2004, 01:54 AM
very stunning! Adding to my collection.

If you wanted more details, maybe add light streaks/swirls or sparkles. May make it look more shiney.

Pipestrell
03-24-2004, 10:09 AM
The tree is starting to grow on me (not literally). It seems to echo Eclipse's hair. (He’s the taller, seme looking one) Though I still stand in defence of the rainbow!

How about a single leaf falling from the tree, either in autumnal tones or in silhouette? Or would that overload the symbolism to you think?

escaflownemoon
03-24-2004, 11:06 AM
ohh I like..the first one with the rainbow reminded me of the story Wuthering Heights. Now, it looks like it more..lol Very good. I like it.

maybe put like one or two leave falling to the ground. Good Job :)

RedHeadOtaku
03-25-2004, 01:03 AM
I love you forever for making a good Demon Diary wall.

Candy-StarR
03-25-2004, 01:07 AM
i like the latest version the best!! looks awesome! :^_^:

omicron_15
03-25-2004, 03:00 PM
The latest one is very nice, great job on the bg.