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acamori
03-22-2004, 11:51 PM
i found this pic and had to make a wall...i was like slapped with inspiration...anyways: here it is (http://filebox.vt.edu/users/aales/Wallpapers/night1.jpg)
Candy-chan
03-22-2004, 11:55 PM
very nice piccie^^
try adding different heights and tones of brown in the "grass"
omicron_15
03-23-2004, 12:57 AM
i like the rice in her hands i dont like the rice/weat brush work on the ground though dosnt look that real, I really dont like most grass brush work unless you put alot of layers in and work on blending.
acamori
03-23-2004, 02:01 AM
ok, i redid the wheat field, it's a bit better, i'll probably tweak it a bit more before i'm done. so here it is (http://filebox.vt.edu/users/aales/Wallpapers/night.jpg)
Candy-chan
03-23-2004, 08:26 AM
much better! ^^
now try adding just a bit more with different heights
escaflownemoon
03-23-2004, 08:40 AM
try adding more shade in between your wheat because she is in the night and only the moon is giving off light so there will be many places that will be dim and dark..it should add more depth if you do that..oh the moon, can you move it somewhere that's not behind her head. It looks distracting. I like your cloud.
oh just a suggestion: make the cloud thinner and put the moon peaking out and add some shade to the moon. :)
acamori
03-23-2004, 01:49 PM
well i tried changing it a bit, made th color range for the wheat go darker and i darkened/thinnned the clouds and add some darker spots to the moon. i don't really want to move the moon because i think it draws attention to her face and ears some. anyways here it is (http://filebox.vt.edu/users/aales/Wallpapers/night2.jpg)
MistressPookyChan
03-23-2004, 02:01 PM
It looks a lot better. There is much more depth in the grass/wheat. Lovely job!
Gjallarhorn
03-23-2004, 11:22 PM
here u go, another post on it......i like the wheat plants on the bottom of wp, and how the moon is mixed in with the clouds.
WinterC_16
03-24-2004, 09:52 PM
nice wp, only problem i c with it is the moon, move it over to the left, it makes the wp look uneven, all the attention is to the right, with the moon to theleft u can balance it :^_^:
NebbyTheEX-Parrot
03-24-2004, 11:01 PM
^^ it has a very dreamy look to it. I don't like the one big huge cloud..if possible can you get rid of the one big huge cloud or make many more smaller ones? The moon looks fine where it is.
acamori
03-25-2004, 12:23 AM
well i changed the clouds, made it more scattered and changed the lighting on them so they look like a moon really is behind them. i didn't move the moon because i like how it looks where it is (being behind her and all) anyways, so here's the newest version (http://www.animegalleries.net/albums/userpics/10101/night.jpg)
Candy-StarR
03-25-2004, 12:32 AM
the little puff of cloud on the left near the bottom looks odd to me.... but it's a great wall none-the-less :^_^:
GangstaKermit
03-26-2004, 01:21 PM
Hm, a bit late :)
I like the wp, the last one is the best so far :)
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