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AJRevenge
02-07-2004, 10:37 AM
Allrighty, last time I posted my wallpaper I was accused of having stolen the background. First off I did not steal the background part of it however built on a tutorial for liquid water however I changed everything to my liking. To set this straight this walls were made by me I used no tutorials or stolen backgrounds. If you're gonna accuse me first be damn sure.

There are two wallpapers The first one is 214KB and the 2nd one is 394KB. Sorry for the huge file sizes but I like to keep good quality.

AJRevenge
02-07-2004, 10:39 AM
The second one is

GangstaSnail
02-07-2004, 10:45 AM
1st one: Looks good, but I'm not sure about litle chars (Boo and Gohan).
The char is a bit jagged, maybe try to blur a bit his edges. Andy why is his sword cut of?

2nd: Try to fade a bit the grid in the bg.
Hm, I'm not sure about the color -> light blue boxes on red bg.

Candy-chan
02-07-2004, 03:13 PM
1)u should remove the second chars, the ones fighting, there only distracting from the main one
2)humm, i agree for the blue boxes and the grid is weird, i dont like it

MistressPookyChan
02-07-2004, 03:17 PM
first off, yelling at the people on the forum for inquiring is not going to make them want to help you. Also, it's part of my job to question if something was stolen, and trust me, I have had to ask many. No need to get uber defensive about it.

secondly, in the future, please put one wallpaper per thread. it helps when people are cretiquing it.

wallpaper 1) he edges are pretty jagged; try to smooth them out. Also, have only the character on the right. Other than that, love the color and boxes.

wallpaper 2) vash's coat looks orange, so it might need to be recolored to go with the red background. Also, the outer glow looks weird.

EternalBlue
02-07-2004, 08:34 PM
I agree, wall1's edges are jagged, use an eraser or some blur to fix that.
wal2 I don't really think the grid fits either. Recolouring might help with the char as pooky said.

AJRevenge
02-08-2004, 12:02 AM
Yeah sry if I seemed too defensive just got me really mad. Anyways I'll be working on the wallpapers and changing them around alot more before I repost.