Son Goku

[Iapetus]

Ok, here is my latest Saiyuki attempt: Goku. I decided to go with a black and white theme, because it somehow worked out better than the color version. However, I'd appreciate any comments or cirticisms that you might have.

-Iapetus

[Candy-chan]

make the grey tone
paler

[shihaf]

Hm you can't really read the 'Son Goku' very well. It's a good picture and concept but I think it needs some more colour.

[asher_aj_wei]

lapetus wants black and white =\
but yeah, the black and white can just be a tad lighter. The words Son Goku can't be seen easily like what shihaf stated.

[Snipe_EX]

the line at his right cheek is not clear

you better fix that

[jumomo]

hmmm i dont like the background ... looks a bit like these simple homepage creating application premade background patterns ... maybe you should change it