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WinterC_16
01-30-2004, 06:11 PM
do you think i should get rid of the cherry blossums? i thought they helped tye it in with the background, maybe i should get different ones. Well wha do u think?

Candy-chan
01-30-2004, 06:16 PM
i dunno, it would look really empty without it. But there not really pretty when there there. And you have to arrange her feet. They are really red(they look bloody)
I think if you add some brushes or make a more busy backgrd id would look better. but good start!^^

shihaf
01-30-2004, 06:21 PM
I like the cherry blossom petals. They add something to the wallpaper. I don't like the 'Chobits'. I don't think it needs to be there.

Ashe
01-30-2004, 06:38 PM
I actually think more petals would do some good. The text doesn't have to be there. Try it with out it. Chii looks a little dark. I don't know about her feet looking bloody, but the image could be lighter. Try more petals and a lighter background and see what happens

WinterC_16
01-30-2004, 06:45 PM
more petals nd i adjusted the hue, she was yellowish so i made her more pink, i guess to pink :P . Well here it is

shihaf
01-30-2004, 06:50 PM
That looks heaps better. Thumbs up :D

MistressPookyChan
01-30-2004, 11:34 PM
I think that those are feathers. o.O;

I, personally, think there should be more. Maybe in a variety of sizes!

Candy-StarR
01-31-2004, 04:34 AM
hmm, i think the cutout on her hair near the bottom right (where her legs are) is a bit rough - the inside-ish part (great english)

I also think the background is a bit dark, but it gives good contrast towards the main image... and pretty much what everyone else said

EternalBlue
01-31-2004, 11:25 AM
Yea the extraction on the insides of her hair could use a bit of work. You might want to vary the sizes/shapes of the sakura petals a bit, and maybe a slightly lighter BG. Other than that good job ^^

Snipe_EX
01-31-2004, 01:46 PM
i agree with all of them

you should add more of these things

and with different sizes

it should make it look alot marrier but not untidy

escaflownemoon
01-31-2004, 02:09 PM
I think you should have some bigger petals flying around and like others said about her hair. Recolor her feet to make it not look bloody. Other than that I think looks great. :)