Wolf's Rain Wallpaper

[shihaf]

Hi all! I've had this picture sitting around on my harddrive for aaages so I thought it was about time I put it to some good use! I'm not too sure about the text that I've use on it. A friend of mine translated it for me from the Wolf's Rain (http://www.wolfs-rain.com) website. I just couldn't think of anything else.
Any comments? I'd love to know what everyone else thinks ^^

[omicron_15]

looks good i like it

[GangstaSnail]

ql, I also like it. The wolfs are great.

[shihaf]

Hey thanks guys :^_^: Does anyone have any comments as to how I can make it look better? Any at all? :lol:

[omicron_15]

Im not sure if i liked the txt, the message fits with the series, but the txt seems a bit too large and detracks from the wall, maybe make it half the size font and position it in a space apposed to acroos mutliple images. since you wanted a crit so bad ;)

[shihaf]

Ok I've changed the font for the text in the wallpaper. It was bothering me before and I've found one that I like and think fits better.

[acamori]

yeah, the text in the second one is considerably better.

[WinterC_16]

Looks awsome. I like the text, what font is it?

[shihaf]

The second one is called Ghostwriter. I got it from here (http://www.simplythebest.net/fonts/). I went on a font raid today XD

[nfok3]

Mmm... great job. I love the scan lines. :P

[shihaf]

Hey thanks! I wasn't gonna use them to start with. I'm glad I did now :)

[MistressPookyChan]

it's a nice start! I like that you changed the font. My issue with it is that the wallpaper seems flat. If that is what you are going for, than cool, but nothing seems to really stick out for me.

[shihaf]

Flat? How so? Can you suggest any way to make it erm.. less flat?

[shihaf]

Alright I think I understand what PookyChan meant ^^ Here's an updated version.

[shihaf]

*bump* ^^;