View Full Version : Kanon Wallpaper

01-29-2004, 02:44 PM
Ok, here is my last creation

PS. Pooky, I just copied a bit your style :D

01-29-2004, 03:15 PM
Hmm, not bad. I'm not really fond of grids though, it's ok here, but I think there's a little much of it. You could isolate it in certain areas maybe. ^^ Good job though.

01-29-2004, 03:19 PM
Yeah, I'll fixe the grid, tnx to acamori that gave me an idea.

01-29-2004, 04:48 PM
I may be biased, but I like the grid! The only real issue I have with it right now is the font; it doesn't fit and it looks jagged around the edges. The background is also a bit plain, but works. Perhaps swirls, brushes, blurs, or other elements might spice it up a bit. Not necissary though

01-29-2004, 06:08 PM
cool wall, nothing to change in my advice

01-29-2004, 08:15 PM
How about a softer blue monotone background? The blue looks too harsh for me. And the text indeed needs a bit of work

01-29-2004, 10:10 PM
i do think that you need to change the font and the colour of the font

it doesnt suit the background

01-30-2004, 07:33 AM
Damn, I realy like that font :D

Anyway, it is better like this? I've changed a bit the text effect and color (the font is stil the same, I couldn't find a better one, but I'm stil searching :D ), and also hued the bg so now it's light blue.

I'm not sure if the bg is better, I preferd the darker one, but anyway, let u decide :D

01-30-2004, 10:56 AM
i think the bg looks better in the second one personally, still not sure about covering the whole thing in that grid

01-30-2004, 04:20 PM
I like the second one more. The text in the first one looked blurry and didn't really fit with the clean-ness of the wallpaper.

Plus I like the grids! I'm always a fan of them :D

01-30-2004, 04:52 PM
I would suggest color matching the house with the same blue grey as the bow on her dress, its sometimes hard to play with the adjustment slides to match a color, I have found that putting a layer over watever you want to change and covering it in the color you want to match it too with the brush too and then using color in the blending options will allow you to match the color more redally.

I like how you used a real image for the bg, thoug the cloud render is somewhat generic for a sky and I like the first images sky color more.

02-02-2004, 08:22 AM
Uf, finaly back!!

Ok, what do u think about this brush touch :D

02-02-2004, 08:51 AM
I like it when the trees are at the back of the grids... The trees that are in front of the grids are too "strong". Put them behind grids

02-02-2004, 08:57 AM
Originally posted by asher_aj_wei@Feb 2 2004, 03:51 PM
I like it when the trees are at the back of the grids... The trees that are in front of the grids are too "strong". Put them behind grids
The right one right!
I made one mistake makin the bg for this wp (the left and the right trees aren't made in the same way) and I'm not sure if I am able to correct it, but I'll try in some way.

02-03-2004, 06:33 PM

Hm, better with this?

02-05-2004, 02:51 PM
I really it but one thing that is really bothering me. It is the edges around her strands of hair needs to be smooth out. I know it's a pain to do perfect extractions with hair like that. :)

I plan on putting this one on my desktop.

02-05-2004, 05:48 PM
yeah, the down left part of the hair,
but only details

02-06-2004, 04:24 PM
Ok, I went carefully around the edges and blured/deleted them.
I hope it's ok now.

PS. That's the original pic that I've used Klick (http://www.animegalleries.net/displayimage.php?album=148&pos=47)

02-06-2004, 05:24 PM
Very nice, yea I know the hair looks kinda weird, but since that's how it was in the pic I'll let it slide B) lol. Good job wiz