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Black Piano
01-29-2004, 11:23 AM
Well i decided to make an Urd wallpaper cause Urd is my Fav character from the show.. so yeah.. its a start so tell me what i should do if anything ok ^^

asher_aj_wei
01-29-2004, 11:35 AM
The text are too far apart, bring them together and stick em... say... together at the Oh! My Goddess... it's too far apart. Also, try using different fonts, those fonts are too "hard" for that soft feel

Black Piano
01-29-2004, 12:11 PM
ok is this better..?

asher_aj_wei
01-29-2004, 12:21 PM
Before I go on any further... Did you try experimenting with the sizes and different fonts? Just try out different arrangements that you like. I don't have to like it, in the end it's your product. However, I still think the text needs work. It's now a little too small~

wizz-o-matic
01-29-2004, 12:22 PM
Yeah, seems better! I like it. Nothing to change in my opinion

Black Piano
01-29-2004, 12:31 PM
ok.. i like the look of this on.. the text is the same as the first but the words are in the same place as the second one..

wizz-o-matic
01-29-2004, 12:44 PM
I think that's better with the handwriting or script font (the 2nd wp).

MistressPookyChan
01-29-2004, 05:11 PM
i agree, the second version's font is better. just play around with it a bit (make it bigger, maybe an outline?).

nfok3
01-29-2004, 05:37 PM
I concur. The Second font is alot more flow---eeee and lends itself better to the feel of the Wallpaper. Excellent work.

Candy-chan
01-29-2004, 06:03 PM
yayy for Urd, she is my fav ah megami sama character too(so pretty hair..)
the wall is cool. But try blurring a bit the insides of her ( does that sound weird? ) its a littttle grainy but that kind of grain is easy to remove. Am i clear? i sound hazy

Snipe_EX
01-29-2004, 06:15 PM
Do you think Urd a little bit toooo flashy