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01-29-2004, 11:54 AM
Hey, how's this one. I used an HQ pic for this, but part of the moon was missing, so I had to redo that part. It might look a little weird but I tried :P
01-29-2004, 11:59 AM
nice. i like it, except i'm not really sure about the flowers in the top left.
other than that it's really good.
01-29-2004, 12:04 PM
Yeah, I'm also not sure about the flowers.
Maybe try to add some border to the baner.
PS. U redid preaty well the mising part of the moon!
01-29-2004, 12:13 PM
:^_^: Ok, here's a version without the flowers, it looks kinda plain to me though without it. Well whatdya think?
01-29-2004, 12:24 PM
Um, I don't think the pic is really working well with the background. The moon is behind her but the sakura petals are casting a shadow on her... How about a day approach? XD
01-29-2004, 12:36 PM
Lol I can't really fix the shadow, that's how it came. Maybe it looks weird cause I flipped the pic. I'll play around with stuff and see how it works out.
I checked the pic. The light seems to be coming from another source than the moon here. Hmmm/
Original Pic (http://www.animegalleries.net/displayimage.php?album=371&pos=3)
01-29-2004, 12:38 PM
Um, I mean day approach so that the shadows would then be "theoretically" correct ^.^ Unless what she's leaning on is a lamplight in a park or something
01-29-2004, 04:03 PM
Ok I took out the moon, and played around with the background a bit. Which one do you think the BG is better suited on?
01-29-2004, 04:05 PM
Or this one? I don't think it fits too well. Maybe I'll tihnk of something later....
01-29-2004, 04:15 PM
Prefer the 3rd one but still the bg dosn't fit well with the char.
01-29-2004, 04:39 PM
Whoa just had an idea haha. I think it fits better than the other 2 but tell me whatcha think.
01-29-2004, 04:41 PM
5th=best so far, very cool and fitting i think
01-29-2004, 04:43 PM
Yeah, I agree, the last is the best so far!
01-29-2004, 04:46 PM
So anything else to change or is that good? ^^
01-29-2004, 06:02 PM
I like your more recent one. The only issue i see is that the text bar's doesn't fit the wall. Yes, it may match the cherry blossoms, but those arent the main color of the wallpaper. I would go with a hue from her dress or the wall.
01-29-2004, 06:45 PM
Ok, I used the blue from the background, is that better?
Edit: lightened the bar
Edit: fixed the jagged diagonals
Edit: fixed some other jagged lines and added shadows to the petals in front of the bar
01-29-2004, 06:49 PM
Sup blueboi? The blue is a better fit than the pink you had, but I'd say that it might be a tad too... harsh. Try a softer blue maybe?
01-29-2004, 06:50 PM
It's only my opinion or the bar is a bit jagged?
01-29-2004, 10:19 PM
Argh, if it is too jagged, I can't fix it very well. The blur just makes it worse, and cutting parts of it makes it even more jagged >_< Well I tried, posted it up there.
01-30-2004, 04:39 AM
Yeah, now seems better.
Maybe try to add some borders to the bar (with diferent color, maybe dark blue) and see how it is.
But it's also great as it is!
01-30-2004, 06:06 PM
Hmm looks good in its latest incarnation, I think a little thing that would add alot to it is have those sakura petals that are infront of the bar make them cast a shadow on the bar like how the petals on the char pic are casting a shadow, some small extraction stuff on her bow some parts on the edge aswell. GJ though.
01-30-2004, 07:46 PM
Where are the extraction problems? If you mean the little pieces:
Right ribbon : The yellow is her hair.
Left ribbon : There's 2 sakura petals right behind that ribbon so it may look like there's a bit there but there's not >_<
I don't see what else, I cleaned up a few jaggedy lines on the edges but nothing else I could pick out.
01-31-2004, 01:40 AM
theres a tiny tiny bit of white on the middle of the side of the left ribbon:P
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