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Justina / Tenchigirl15
01-24-2004, 11:06 PM
I hope ya like it!!! I did alot of work on it!! :D

onslaught2029
01-25-2004, 12:10 AM
Interesting concept, but here's my two cents:

The whole wall is kinda blurry.

There's no real focus point. The girl is so blended into the background that the wall looks incomplete somehow.

The katakana could be brought out more, maybe make it less transparent.

All in all, this is a good first wall. If you could find a good picture to add to the foreground, it would be that much better. Another thing you could play with is to make the whole background monotone.

Ashe
01-25-2004, 12:24 AM
It is a little blurry, but I like that. It made it really interesting to look at when I set it on my desktop. The character and the katana could stand out a little more. The top thing I would suggest is to make the kanji (title) less transparent. For a first wallpaper you did a really good job! :^_^:

MistressPookyChan
01-25-2004, 02:26 AM
i think it's supposed to be blurry. :^_^: One suggestion would be to add more swirls (black? darker red?) to the wallpaper. Another would be to make SOMETHING stand out and be crisp, like the kanji (my recommendation) or the character.

It's a great first PS 7 wall!

wizz-o-matic
01-25-2004, 06:15 AM
Nice concept.

Yeah, I agree with Pooky. I like it the way it is (blurry) but maybe try to add more swirls. And also, make the kanji less transparent.

Good wp.

EternalBlue
01-25-2004, 08:50 AM
I agree with the others. Personally I think it'd be better if you made the Kanji stick out. Thatcharacter looks good as is. Maybe a few darker swirls or something would do nicely.

Candy-chan
01-25-2004, 11:53 AM
whoa, for a first, its reaaaally cool, i dont think there is nothing to change

Justina / Tenchigirl15
01-25-2004, 08:46 PM
ok, what do ya guys think about this? :D sence ya guys think it needs to be changed a little!!!! :^_^:

Gjallarhorn
01-25-2004, 09:12 PM
wow. better than my first(its a wallpaper of hiei and his tear gem. i made it in less than 20 minutes, so its not really good.)

EternalBlue
01-25-2004, 09:18 PM
Mhmm, I think it's better. The kanji are noticeable and clear now ^^

Justina / Tenchigirl15
01-25-2004, 10:12 PM
Originally posted by [email protected] 25 2004, 09:18 PM
Mhmm, I think it's better. The kanji are noticeable and clear now ^^
yea, sence now you can see a little bit of Penny's face. but I think its a little better then the original wallpaper.

anyways heres the original image that I used for the wallpaper :^_^: http://www.geocities.com/sailorzirk/AkarPenny18.jpg

anyway anyways, thats a nice wallpaper DarkTwilight, thats good for you first!! :D

haruko
01-25-2004, 10:21 PM
sorry but the link dont work :unsure: just upload the pic

Justina / Tenchigirl15
01-25-2004, 10:30 PM
Originally posted by [email protected] 25 2004, 10:21 PM
sorry but the link dont work :unsure: just upload the pic
ok, here :^_^:

MistressPookyChan
01-26-2004, 12:33 AM
I think you should make the kanji black. Also, I think they should be less pixely (the edges of the kanji are bumpy)

omicron_15
01-26-2004, 02:09 AM
I think you did a great job working with the low quality picture you had like pooky said work on the txt and it will look great, very good first wall

akachan
01-26-2004, 04:00 AM
really very very good job :^_^:

wizz-o-matic
01-26-2004, 05:21 AM
Yeah, I agree with Pooky about the kanji!

Justina / Tenchigirl15
01-30-2004, 08:03 PM
Originally posted by [email protected] 26 2004, 12:33 AM
I think you should make the kanji black. Also, I think they should be less pixely (the edges of the kanji are bumpy)
like what do ya mean by that? :unsure: like making her cape black? :ph34r:

nfok3
01-30-2004, 08:25 PM
very, very good. However, the Kanji still looks a bit... rough. Try to smooth em out a bit and darken them just a tad more. Again, Good job!