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Iapetus
01-21-2004, 12:37 AM
I can't help but think that something is missing from this wall. Any suggestions? I'm open to any and all ideas.

-Iapetus

Kelvin Wenas
01-21-2004, 04:15 AM
isnt it sha gojyo from gensoumaden saiyuki?

check out his right arm (from your point of view, its on your left) some parts of his arm still needs to be cut

wizz-o-matic
01-21-2004, 08:03 AM
Yep, it's Sha Gojyo from Gensoumaden Saiyuki.
Yeah, I agree with Kelvin about his right arm. And also u should clean around his hair (right part).

Other than that good wp.

asher_aj_wei
01-21-2004, 09:17 AM
You need some text~ Try that =D

akachan
01-21-2004, 09:19 AM
and you could add a monotone sephia bg image behind the rope(I hope that this is the right name for... :huh: :P ) like a closed room or another place (that can remind the anime) ;) it would add a 3-d idea

MistressPookyChan
01-21-2004, 11:02 AM
cloud backgrounds only tend to work when it's paired with something else. I like the idea of a background (like a photo) behind the ropes. Maybe a mountain scene? city scene for the rinestone cowboy feel?

diablo111
01-21-2004, 02:22 PM
Yeah...like pooky said, it needs something more behind the ropes, nice idea and a good start!

Iapetus
01-21-2004, 06:53 PM
Thanks for all of your advice, I greatly appreciate it!

Here is the second version, with a few changes. First of all, I touched up Gojyo, and so he should look a bit cleaner now. Secondly, I put in a whole different background.

I personally think this looks better than my first version, but there could probably be more I could do to it. Any more reccomendations are appreciated.

-Iapetus

MistressPookyChan
01-21-2004, 09:05 PM
it's much better. how about making some of the ropes faded to add a 3d look? like, some crisp and some faded?

akachan
01-22-2004, 03:13 AM
better now...you could make the bg a little bit lighter

wizz-o-matic
01-22-2004, 05:08 AM
I like the new bg! but yeah, I agree with lighter one, but just a bit!

Iapetus
01-22-2004, 03:11 PM
Third edit. Each individual rope was darkened slightly different from the rest, and the background was made a bit brighter.

-Iapetus

wizz-o-matic
01-22-2004, 03:28 PM
Yeah, now seems more realistic!

Good job!

MistressPookyChan
01-22-2004, 07:48 PM
It's looking a lot better. Another thing I would do is t add shadows to the interesecting rope. when two ropes cross, the bottom-most rope should have a little shadow on it b/c of the other rope being on top. Makes sence?

akachan
01-23-2004, 04:24 AM
I agree with pooky :^_^:

Kelvin Wenas
01-23-2004, 05:55 AM
need some parts to be cut, around his head and chin

asher_aj_wei
01-23-2004, 09:29 PM
Extraction problems:
Face, Hair, Shoulder, Hat

gadgetgirl16
01-24-2004, 11:50 PM
I think u should make the background a little brighter and add shadow on the background on the ropes and the cowboy (to make the cowboy look like he is standing in frount of a picture) and eddit a little around the head and sholders (white is showing a little) and see what u think.............

Ashe
01-25-2004, 12:33 AM
The shadows would be good. The image still needs to be cleaned up a little: left shoulder (his left) has red on it, between the strands of his bangs still has the original image colors in it, the hat still has some surrounding white, and the back of his hair still has some white. Try that and see how it goes.