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Rizuchan
09-25-2009, 05:02 PM
http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/ccsakura/ccsprism.htm

There's one stanza of the translation that's not quite right. It's the cutest line from the cutest song ever, so I can't just leave it alone!


Magic is in that smile, isn't it?
Something just pops up魔法だね その 笑顔
なんか ほっとするよ

The whole second line is just wrong, and I think the meaning of the first line was lost because of it. it should be:
It's magic, isn't it? Your smile
Somehow makes me feel relieved

AzureDark
09-26-2009, 01:45 PM
frecklegirl is in my blacklist for her Picnic trans that was so bad I've rewritten it.

I want your whole t/l for this and if you can, put more corrections up for those done by frecklegirl...

Rizuchan
09-26-2009, 06:02 PM
Okay. I actually looked over her CCS stuff real quick and didn't see any other glaring errors like this one, but I'll take a more thorough look.

And yay! I love this song so much. <3

Here it comes, steadily
Hey, isn't it pretty?

Shining softly on top of a leaf
Hey, the raindrops
Full of wonder, dancing back and forth
It's a message telling me not to forget how to be cheerful

Even taking a roundabout way is lovely
Having met up again

It's magic, isn't it? Your smile
Somehow makes me feel relieved

A pocket full of angels dancing
It's a message telling me to believe in myself

Full of beauty, dancing back and fourth
It's a present from the sky for my persistent heart

I wonder if there's something there? On the other side of this street
C'mon, let's go! Let's go! If we do, we'll know

A pocket full of angels dancing
It's a message telling me that it'll be all right as long as it's me

Full of wonder, dancing back and forth
It's a present from the sky for my dreaming heart

Here it comes, steadily
Hey, isn't it pretty?