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wizz-o-matic
01-14-2004, 10:54 AM
Here is my last creation.
Yeah, this is my first wp with boxes :D

btw. Which is more correct:
Ah! My Goddess or
Oh! My Goddess

Edit. cuz the link wasn't working I've upload it here.

MistressPookyChan
01-14-2004, 11:09 AM
The shadow and the movement of the wallpaper seem to be going in opposite directions. Try moving the shadow to the other side so it looks like it's going towards the center of the circle-thing. Also, I'm not sure if that is the right shade of purple. I would go for a more pastely purple to go with the wedding theme. Another element you might want to add would be sparkles, flower petals, or other type of design. Just make sure that if you add more to the wallpaper that it doesnt make the wallpaper look crowded and tacky.

it's a good start! Just keep going on with it. ^-^

also, i usually see it written "Ah! My Goddess".

Black Piano
01-14-2004, 04:54 PM
its really nice, but the cutting out of the picture around the hair isnt very good.. and the pictures of Skuld and Belldandy are from Ah! My Goddess..but Urd is Oh! My Goddess.. and so is the one with all of them together.. so its really a mixture.

ownerizer
01-14-2004, 06:08 PM
Very...uh...trendy there mac.

wizz-o-matic
01-15-2004, 05:11 PM
Pooky: I'm not so good in English, what's exactly pastely purple color?

Ok, I don't think that I'll change the direction of the shaddow. I wanted to keep the original direction, I tried to change it but it became strange (the main shaddow went to the center of the bg but the shaddows on the chars went on the opposit side).

The re-extraction isn't a problem, I've already done it.

Any other coments?

MistressPookyChan
01-15-2004, 06:29 PM
I ment light purple, like the light color in my avatar's hair. The purple hue you used is very bright.

wizz-o-matic
01-16-2004, 08:09 AM
Ok, I've changed the color, redid the extraction and add some text!

Here it is:

darkparrot
01-16-2004, 01:27 PM
Maybe you could blend the edges of Belldandy's hair, it kinda pixelated.

wizz-o-matic
01-16-2004, 05:25 PM
Originally posted by darkparrot@Jan 16 2004, 07:27 PM
Maybe you could blend the edges of Belldandy's hair, it kinda pixelated.
I've got some problems with but I'll try to correct it in some way :D

MistressPookyChan
01-16-2004, 06:49 PM
I'm still not digging the color. it still seems bright. did you try very light blue?

RequiMem
01-16-2004, 06:55 PM
Pick the same color as the shadows in Belldandy's dress. I think that will work.

EternalBlue
01-16-2004, 11:03 PM
Hmmm no problem with the colour, I actually kinda like it :D. But then I would kinda like to see it with a darker colour....hmm, well your choice ;)

wizz-o-matic
01-17-2004, 10:46 AM
Originally posted by MistressPookyChan@Jan 17 2004, 12:49 AM
I'm still not digging the color. it still seems bright. did you try very light blue?
Already thought about :D

So, here is the A version (light blue, like in the Belldandy's shaddow):

wizz-o-matic
01-17-2004, 10:50 AM
And here is the B version (darker blue, stil the same as above):

Candy-chan
01-17-2004, 04:00 PM
well the difference isnt so noticable, but i think the lighter one is better. I also think you could do something with the text, like putting it on the side or adding some "things there i cant remember the name( you know, to make it glow, give a shadow, blah blah blah)"
anyway, the color change is muuuuuuuuch better like that
^^

EternalBlue
01-17-2004, 04:30 PM
Yea I think it looks better with the light blue. I agree that the font could use a shadow or glow though. :^_^:

wizz-o-matic
01-17-2004, 05:01 PM
Ok, I'll consider to do something abouth the text.

I've just played a bit with the bg, tried new brushes (that I downloaded), so tell me if u like it.

I just wana finish this wp :D

Candy-chan
01-17-2004, 05:06 PM
hum, i dont know, im not sure..

MistressPookyChan
01-17-2004, 06:23 PM
it looks A LOT better with the blue. I'm not sure if those are the right flowers to use, but i like how they are used.

darkparrot
01-17-2004, 07:58 PM
Yay! You fixed her hair! :P

Candy-chan
01-18-2004, 02:46 PM
oh and by the way, im pretty sure Oh! my goddess is the english manga translation and Ah! my goddes is everything else. Ah! Megami Sama being the original title.

wizz-o-matic
01-18-2004, 04:31 PM
I've done some reserch and seems that originaly was Oh! My Goddess (that fanshubers translated).
Then some fanshubers didn't like the translation (Ah! Megami sama) to Oh!, so they keept Ah! and add My Goddes -> Ah! My Goddes.

Candy-chan
01-18-2004, 05:44 PM
but the english manga is oh! and every other thing i know is ah!, thats not very good.....
well I didnt know that, humm, we learn every day
^^

EternalBlue
01-18-2004, 11:40 PM
Hmm I don't think the flowers are the right kind for this, doesn't seem to fit right. Otherwise good job B)

tarnak
01-19-2004, 09:33 PM
The movie is "Ah" and the oav is "Oh".

akachan
01-20-2004, 07:34 AM
the italian translation is "oh! mia dea" ;)
Hard task!, good job!mhh...is the image that is hard itself...the leaves in the original img are really black or is my monitor that's going bad? maybe the lines could be lighter with a hue of blue( which is better than the purple :^_^: ).the flowers should have white petals

wizz-o-matic
01-20-2004, 01:14 PM
Yp, that's the original pic, I found it at AtPictures.com.

I'll remove the flowers in the bg.

btw. Realy bad translation :lol: (the translation IS right but I don't like it :D )

wizz-o-matic
01-26-2004, 08:22 AM
*bump*

Ok, I have some time before the next exame, so I redid a bit the wp.

This time the flowers in the bg are white (like akachan sugested).

So, it's any better.

EternalBlue
01-26-2004, 09:15 AM
Yea I think that fits quite a lot better than the purple ones, but I'll wait and see what other people think ^^

akachan
01-26-2004, 09:30 AM
I can only agree :^_^: I've suggested that, and I like the result Miss Wizzard :lol: :lol: (stop with joking)

darkparrot
01-26-2004, 01:50 PM
Yes better then the rest, though you have to fix belldandy's hair again :P

MistressPookyChan
01-26-2004, 09:20 PM
The white flowers look much better. One suggestion (sorry! I know you're sick of them) would be to move the text to a side instead of having it in the middle.

wizz-o-matic
01-27-2004, 03:35 AM
Moving a side, u mean to the right (or left).

Ok, I'm informing u that u wont hear from me till Wednesday (yeah, another exam to pass :D ).

MistressPookyChan
01-27-2004, 05:20 AM
I would say right, because that's where the main image is.

good luck on your exam!

escaflownemoon
01-27-2004, 03:20 PM
I think it's a lot better because of the white flowers good job. way to go.
Did you pass?

wizz-o-matic
01-28-2004, 06:07 AM
Ok, I'll move it as soon as I can :D

For the exams, still don't know, the resoults aren't out yet.

wizz-o-matic
01-29-2004, 08:44 AM
*rebump*

Yesterday we overfilled this forum so I must rebump this topic :lol:

Ok, I think that this should be the last version (or no).

Edit: corrected the text.

EternalBlue
01-29-2004, 09:22 AM
Looks good to me ^^

Black Piano
01-29-2004, 12:45 PM
i like it, i like it ^^

the text, um.. why is it just Goddess instead of Goddesses..?

wizz-o-matic
01-29-2004, 12:52 PM
Originally posted by Black Piano@Jan 29 2004, 07:45 PM
the text, um.. why is it just Goddess instead of Goddesses..?
Uf, yeah, my mistake :P

Edit: I've corrected it

MistressPookyChan
01-29-2004, 05:10 PM
ooooh! the bottom of skuld's shoes have a little white outside of the outline.

Snipe_EX
01-29-2004, 06:37 PM
I think you should edit it a little bit more

wizz-o-matic
01-29-2004, 06:41 PM
Originally posted by MistressPookyChan@Jan 30 2004, 12:10 AM
ooooh! the bottom of skuld's shoes have a little white outside of the outline.
Actualy it's the same on the original pic so I keept it like that!

Snipe_EX: any sugestion how to edit this wp?

Snipe_EX
01-29-2004, 06:52 PM
well i agree with pookychan

although it is small but i kinda notice it

but it is ok

wizz-o-matic
01-29-2004, 06:58 PM
Actualy what Pooky mentioned it's the edge of the below part of here shoes.

Here's the original pic.

Snipe_EX
01-29-2004, 07:02 PM
oooooooooooooo

Is it the skirt thing she is wearing