PDA

View Full Version : I Have Made A New One Tell Me What You Think



demonplight
01-12-2004, 10:39 PM
Ok I think I need to do something with the color but I dont know what. any way tell me what you think. ant look at that building what can I do to get it to blur into the backround better. it sticks out to much.

asher_aj_wei
01-12-2004, 11:37 PM
I think your wall looks flat. Meaning that there's nothing that's outstanding... The whole wall doesn't seem to have a main focus - although I have seen walls that don't have any main focus but still looks fantastic. Unfortunately, this isn't one of those hehe ( not insulting, just that it's not there yet =D )... The extraction needs work... Look at her hair

MistressPookyChan
01-13-2004, 01:48 AM
i agree that it looks a bit flat. perhaps blurring the city would help. also, the edges of the character are jagged.

wizz-o-matic
01-13-2004, 11:56 AM
Oh, u have put an angelic vision in front of a overcrouded and poluted city.

Other than that, I agree with others.

escaflownemoon
01-13-2004, 01:11 PM
same as the others.

nucleardesignate
01-13-2004, 02:44 PM
(Same thoughts). Try making everything in the background darker, and with less contrast (and those lights on that building that protrudes up are wierd.. maybe make it glow). And the angel over the polluted city- I guess that's wierd, but seeing something different isn't a bad thing.

Kenshin
01-13-2004, 07:01 PM
my opinion it looks good, but yeah, it would look better if it was blurred in the back, but i dont really know how to do that

Candy-chan
01-13-2004, 07:45 PM
same as others, try monotone backgr or at least "remove" some colors so it doesnt look too flat

demonplight
01-13-2004, 08:19 PM
I did some work on it tell me what you think. also I just saw that white line on it, I will work on that the next time I work on this wall paper.

EternalBlue
01-13-2004, 09:33 PM
Good job, but you might want to make the character stand out a bit more, a shadow or a little outline maybe... Otherwise gj ^^

wizz-o-matic
01-14-2004, 11:17 AM
There is still too much contrast in the bg.
And also the char is jagged.

I'm not sure if u saw but on the left part the city seems cut of.