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alucardrip
01-09-2004, 12:07 AM
Check out my wallpaper and tell me what you guys think of it

It's a wallpaper of Final Fantasy 7 Advent Children

haruko
01-09-2004, 12:44 AM
thats aweomse but for the color of the clothes i dont think it matches the backround. you might want to try to make it a little darker to suit there clothes but not so dark the clothes and lines dont stand out. if you keep working it will be a very good wallpaper. oh and when you center stuff in a wallpaper it looks kinda tacky but you pulled it off. good job

MistressPookyChan
01-09-2004, 02:02 AM
i agree that the background is too light for the image. also, the character looks like it is floating in mid air. adding a shadow under the character would fix that.

i noticed you submitted this wallpaper to put on AW.com. In the future, ask for a cretique BEFORE submitting. You also didn't include your information (username, email, etc) which automatically disqualifies your wallpaper for submission. may want to make these changes ASAP or wait a couple weeks for the next submission round.

alucardrip
01-09-2004, 03:47 AM
Thanks for the criticism guy that is what I was looking for.
This is only the second wallpaper I have ever done.
I will have an updated pic in a few days.

jumomo
01-09-2004, 06:26 AM
i dont like it ... looks weird for me

wizz-o-matic
01-09-2004, 10:13 AM
O_o, great concept but I agree with Pooky. The bg is too light and try to add some shaddow.
It would be even better if that logo (in the bg) was glowing.

keep trying!

escaflownemoon
01-09-2004, 06:09 PM
Wizzard, that's not a bad idea with the logo glowing. Umm I don't know if you already fixed and have one ready and but I don't know if i'm the only one who sees this but your man is a little ridget like the arms and his coat. So, ,maybe fix that a bit. (outline) It looks clean tho. Glowing and a darker bg would be awesome. anyways good job.

alucardrip
01-10-2004, 06:13 PM
Ok guy’s I updated the pic

Candy-StarR
01-10-2004, 06:19 PM
The logo looks awesome... but the bg could still be darker, i think
And you'll need to do some more extraction on the cloud (is that the charater) half's hair... if you get what im saying, and also around the edges of the shoes
It's looking alot better though

haruko
01-10-2004, 08:10 PM
mucho better! :D it looks great! exept for... :( the backround could use some texture instead of a plain dark one and the extraction on clouds hair could use some more time on it. other than that i can tell this is going to be a very good wallpaper that i shall add to my collection :^_^: keep at it and this will be a very very good wallpaper

alucardrip
01-10-2004, 10:03 PM
How about this for some background texture?
Oh yes and the stuff around the hair is there because of the background glow effect I used

Candy-StarR
01-10-2004, 10:12 PM
That looks sooo good now!
Awsome wallpaper!
:lol:

Hurry and post the new one in the wallpaper submissions before they close

haruko
01-10-2004, 10:48 PM
*pats alucardrip on back* :lol: very nice the affect looks way cool you have created a very good wallpaper

wizz-o-matic
01-11-2004, 08:21 AM
O_o, that's damn good! I like the bg effect!

Good job!!

onslaught2029
01-11-2004, 10:29 AM
Good job. Did you find the pic merged like that or did you do it yourself?

alucardrip
01-11-2004, 02:07 PM
onslaught2029 i merged the pics my self

Black_Leo
01-11-2004, 02:08 PM
although it looks kinda weird I think the merging came out excellent.

asher_aj_wei
01-11-2004, 10:58 PM
*throws in vote for most original wallpaper created in months*
Lots of creativity and testing~ Fantastic~
About the wall, on Cloud's side, is it supposed to be blocky at the orange colour section?
On the merging: I love this part of your wall - really creative. The middle line needs just a wee bit of adjusting. There's a line at the hair section and the body section. Can you do something about that?
Sephy's hair and Cloud's arms look edgy, smoothen those?
Once again, fantastic wall~

MistressPookyChan
01-12-2004, 12:33 AM
the newer version looks a lot better

alucardrip
01-13-2004, 01:06 AM
thanks

Here’s another one with just a couple of differences

alucardrip
01-13-2004, 01:37 AM
Hers's one with out the blocks for you asher_aj_wei

Kenshin
01-13-2004, 07:16 PM
hi, the wallpaper looks awesome and i got no suggestions or anything

Great Job

escaflownemoon
01-13-2004, 07:34 PM
Awesome wall. Nice concept of the merging the pics to gether.

alucardrip
01-15-2004, 05:40 PM
Ok I fixed the hair tell me what you think.

asher_aj_wei
01-16-2004, 12:14 PM
I think the wall is pretty much done. Good work. Now try something new. B)