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Eli Riddle
12-01-2003, 02:41 AM
well that was a los of time since I had made a wallpaper
Sorry if its to ....amm...how can I say it? well you can tell me wat it's missing in it

donĀ“t be cruel I like this wallpaper, itĀ“s very dificult to find full moon images. all of the manga have letters on it!

iĀ“m mexican, sorry for my written english

asher_aj_wei
12-01-2003, 07:25 AM
Doesn't look too bad... I don't know if you should tone down the two brighter pictures to fit the overall look or not... it's wholly up to you. And the main picture, what's with the girl? Did she paste a mapel leaf by her mouth or something? =D

escaflownemoon
12-01-2003, 03:08 PM
umm you did a really nice job on it. I think you should make the hearts to be more transparent...it looks too busy on the characters and it makes the focus on the hearts flying everywhere rather than the actual character itself. Maybe you should also brighten the big picture and the two smaller ones a bit dimmer...but hey if you like it that way, that's all it matters. keep it up.:)

darkparrot
12-01-2003, 03:21 PM
Nice wall over all. Though I think the images on the left could be a little clearer, good job.

MistressPookyChan
12-01-2003, 05:54 PM
it's good! I would make the stuff on the left monotone to draw more attention towards the images on the right. or maybe... greytone image with a pastel accent color?

ownerizer
12-01-2003, 07:32 PM
Originally posted by asher_aj_wei@Dec 1 2003, 07:19 AM
Did she paste a mapel leaf by her mouth or something? =D
Strawberry, y0s

asher_aj_wei
12-01-2003, 09:26 PM
Originally posted by ownerizer@Dec 2 2003, 08:26 AM
Strawberry, y0s
Ah~ I see it now~ My eyes have been opened~

_hades the wicked
12-01-2003, 10:23 PM
I just don't really like the text... It's too opaque. Maybe make it a little more faded.

Candy-chan
12-01-2003, 10:41 PM
is good,i like it, but maybe do something with the hearts, it gives a too blurry overall (maybe even remove them completely, and pooky-chan is right, mabe try giving pastel colours to the pict, anyway, good job

wizz-o-matic
12-02-2003, 03:50 AM
I like it but I laso agree with Pooky!

Nice concept!

omicron_15
12-02-2003, 03:54 AM
I like the design and the look of the wall, nice and subdued/dark aswell I totally like that. I would use it if the char's werent so cutsey :P not my style but great job!

Eli Riddle
12-02-2003, 01:40 PM
hey thanks! well I i will maybe make the hearts more transparent an the biger image more clear, well i will try and see if it looks better.

god I have to made it all over again jaja, I forgot to save the proyect and I only saved the image, jeje iĀ“m in other world.

Thanks to everyone, I think that I understood (my english itĀ“s not that good you know)

Eli Riddle
12-02-2003, 02:06 PM
well it didnĀ“t taked so long jeje
well tell me what version do you like most ok?

darkparrot
12-02-2003, 03:19 PM
I like the 2nd one you made best!

escaflownemoon
12-02-2003, 03:40 PM
the second one for me. great job. :)

omicron_15
12-02-2003, 04:36 PM
I like the first.

MistressPookyChan
12-02-2003, 08:25 PM
I like the second one better, but now the font is a bit hidden because of the background. If you give it a soft black glow it will look good.

Eli Riddle
12-03-2003, 03:17 PM
thanks to everyone! maybe in other time ( 2 or 3 years ) IĀ“ll be a great mangaka and a master in wallpapers....well dreams donĀ“t hurt enyone.

I will post more walls^^

(really really I like more the first wall muajajaja)